Tough Farewell

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Your farewell triggered a hustle of snow Hiding the bare loneliness inside me North breeze does amorous or humid blow Your farewell triggered a hustle of snow It appears empty without your light flow As the stars are out at night, you oft see Your farewell triggered a hustle of snow Hiding the bare loneliness inside me. Written: June 1st, 2023

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/13/2023 1:17:00 PM

Farewells are sad, unless there is the hope of a welcome in store some time in the future, bringing sunshine to melt the snow. Loneliness is such a sad emotion. You captured it well in this poem.

Deb M

Date: 6/2/2023 9:48:00 PM

Awww Lasaad what a beautifully sad poem….touched my heart! I do not like farewells …..Debx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/2/2023 5:15:00 AM

Farewell can trigger emotions--especially in loneliness--as you convey in this poem, Lasaad.