Touch-Monday

My eyes are sorely touched with the harsh flash of puce and pink-red exhaust fumes leak lazy from the line of matchbox cars clogging humanities sewers lungs gasp at green tires lay rubber like the wail of infants taken from tit dangling arms wave the air seeking entrance to the already well come fill’d shunt sighing rubbing my lids lights strobe just past the seared surfaces of my bruised retinas my feet throb swollen now depressing releasing pedal push. One may be "Touched" in physically, mentally or spiritually. Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest Debbie. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
Brown Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie in the contest. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 9:27 PM
Lots of touchy-feelings in this one Debbie. Congratulations. With love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 6:37 PM
Wow, this had me feeling miserable right from the start..good job. congrats. BG
Phookan Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Congrats Debbie on your well deserved winning place with this excellent write on Monday.luv,gautami
Poet Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Wonderful write.Congrats Debbie on your big win--kash
Roberts Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 9:47 AM
congrats on your win Debbie, makes me glad I live across the highway from where I work, 5 minute commute
Devonshire Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 9:43 AM
Incredible images, Deb. Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Many congrats, Debbie : )
Mannan Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 5:52 AM
bruised retinas, such a super image. Many warm congrats for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 4:42 AM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry in a great presentation... enjoy another top spot for a top notch entry luv..
K. Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 11:11 PM
You sure brought some Monday blues here, Debbie --amazing write, sure felt this-- & ah you mention feet here, reminds me of the comment you left me before, poor swollen feet you have but I sure am glad that they are pretty feet! ^_^
Ronthorpe Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Very nice. Congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 5:22 PM
wow, debbie, I love this one on Monday. a fave for me here. Can't believe i had not seen it earlier and a very well deserved win.
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:19 AM
Egads....this makes me soooo glad we live in a small town!! You have captured brilliantly....the life on Monday mornings we used to know (long ago..thankfully!) Great poetry expression!
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April 19, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Good luck in the contest. I just listed free verse cause this ole boy didn't know what to call it. I must be "touched" as those rednecks say. Vince
Phookan Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 5:15 AM
Brilliant entry for this contest.nette will simply love this.Good luck...Love, Gautami
Vlademar Ii Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 12:32 AM
Very good! I like he way you 'diamoned' it.
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April 19, 2011 at 12:30 AM
puyx
Foulk Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 7:25 PM
love this syle, a great write Debbie, enjoyed it.
Doreus Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 5:14 PM
i lov this diamante... it really shaped up nicely... forgive the pun i had to
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