Touching

Soft breath on nape of my neck

   Gentle fingers caressing

      Your eyes gaze into my eyes

   ...    hearts and minds touching
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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La France Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 6:27 AM
Just enthralling and beautiful, and captivating~~
Falotico Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Such beauty in your words... well written my dear poet friend...always Michael
Devonshire Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 10:13 AM
You set quite a romantic mood in your poem, Francine. Perhaps that means your heart has remained warm even though the harsh winter lingers. You made me smile! Thank you. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:16 AM
sensually breathtaking and well- scribed, francine! best of winning luck to you! :) hugggs, nette
Mantle Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 6:15 AM
Very beautiful and descriptive. Enjoyed Em
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 10:01 PM
Romantic one. ME likes!
Mannan Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 9:00 PM
A superb touching doditsu Francine.
Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:49 PM
Another nice descriptive example of a dodoitsu. Well done, Francine.
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