Touches of You

"touches of you"

you touch me in a way no other can
its how you take my hand perhaps
the feel of your love

great is the impact of your smile
seeing light in your eyes perhaps
the touch that all is right

beautiful are verses whispered
perhaps single words or each note
reaching me with your heart

what I forever adore most of all
perhaps its what others don't know
dangerously near the touches of you

SkyWatcher
10-10-21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Deo Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 11:22 AM
always mysterious, always loving with uncommon zeal and care! I love the reference to "hand" & I love you being part of PS, Lisa. shalom, shalom
Ricci Avatar
October 13, 2021 at 2:53 AM
Anil Anil Anil - Thank you Thank you Thank you (smile). Truly. Always am I honored by you and your sentiments. Never do I take you your visits or comments for granted. Poetrysoup is lucky to have you as a member as well. Through poetry I am grateful that our paths have crossed. Have a beautiful day and may your devices always be working and running for you. You guessed it Anil, Shalom Shalom Shalom
Buhagiar Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:37 AM
Lovely and romantic. Pity you cannot say it of me. With medication I feel very sad.
Ricci Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:45 AM
Dear Victor - Good Afternoon - You are most beautiful. Truly. You have touched me with your comments. I am sorry and saddened with the medication part however. I hope it is helping. I will forever thank you Victor for all graces. Have a beautiful afternoon. Please remain safe. Blessings always.
Horsman Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:23 AM
I too feel this is a very powerful poem, it such is touching.
Ricci Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:42 AM
Good Morning Good Morning Good Morning hh - Thank you ever so much. I am honored that you mentioned powerful because I'm hoping that the emotive factor is present. Always is it wonderful to see you. Have a great morning and day and I will see you and your page very shortly.
Romios Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 3:53 PM
Powerful lines, and not overdone! My fav is the last stanza...)) WOWSER! Pangie
Romios Avatar
October 12, 2021 at 11:20 PM
All fine here. You are welcome for the comment. Sweet dreams?..PANGIE
Ricci Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:17 AM
Wow - Good Morning Pangie - Hi - Its so nice to see you. Thank you very much for such a fabulous review and comment to which I never take for granted. I hope this day finds you well. Have a beautiful morning and day.
Rose  Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 6:03 AM
When one gets as close to your heart as can be, its dangerous, and exciting nicely written dear poetess, have a blessed day, :)
Ricci Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:17 AM
Good Morning Mystic - Hi - Many thank yous for such a lovely review and comment. Truly. Have a wonderful morning and day.
Ricci Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:13 AM
Good Morning Mystic - Hi - Many thank yous for such a lovely review and comment. Truly. Have a wonderful morning and day.
Goff Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Spiritual contact only heightens with actual touch, good write, Lisa!
Ricci Avatar
October 11, 2021 at 1:11 AM
Good Morning James - Thank you very much. May all know of love. Have a wonderful day and keep enjoying poetry.
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