Touched By Your Flame

I watched them gather round
The warmth of your flame
Like campers at campfire time
Huddling close to you
Pushing and jostling
For the best place
I saw your warmth
Dancing off their faces
Small cinders escaping into the night
I followed the sparks drifting up
On the chilly breeze
Riding high…disappearing into the stars

I was cold
I was alone
On the edge
And yet…I dared not go near you
Though your light invited me
And I wanted so much to be warmed
By you
Yet….how could I find a place
By those encircling you
Watching the mesmerizing display 
Of your orange and yellow flames
There was no place
Among the gathering of....
The strong, the beautiful, the insistent
So, on the outskirts I stayed
Tears trickling down my cheeks
Cold
Alone…

I waited…I held back
Until they all left
One by one
Some bumping into me
Not even aware that I was alive
I waited until you had almost died out
No longer on display
But a warm glow of embers
Still orange and glowing with desire
And I approached
Shyly…
Longingly…
Needing to see you dance
For me….only for me
And I coaxed you
In my clumsy way
My fingers cold
My heart ablaze

Suddenly....you burst into flame
A pillar of fire
Miracle of love
For I had not added any kindling
But my little heart
And yet it seems you had waited
Knowing I would come
And my slightest touch
Made the flames spring to life
Voracious flames
Flames reaching the high heavens 
Your heat overpowering
Consuming
I almost threw myself into you
Wanting to reach the center
Of the heat and warmth
Of your beauty…

I spent the night
Out under the stars
Lying naked
Yet not cold
Naked
Yet not ashamed
Naked
Yet not shy
For your glow was my covering

I let myself be touched
Time and again
By licking fingers of fire
By the burning flames of your desire
For….ME!

For Gail's Contest
Touched by Your Flame
May 27, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Belle Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Oh wow! I had to say you're very good Eileen. There is so much powerful words into that mind of yours. Bravo! LoveLots, Ara
Johnson Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 11:12 PM
Your romanticism is so sweet it makes me weep.
Manassian Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 11:15 PM
What a sweet compliment! Thank you!
Ludden Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 10:47 AM
A dream night--with a dream girl. Could anything be more perfect?
Ludden Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 11:03 AM
it fits you
Manassian Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Robert, thank you for your sweet post. I need encouragement tonight. This came at the right time.
Carroll Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 8:21 PM
Hi Eileen, An amorous write with passion...Thanks for sharing this one and for your visit to my verse.. Ken
Anglesey Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 10:12 AM
Eileen, such a captivating poem with powerful metaphoric lines. I am simply amazed by the way you take the reader through this relationship from reluctance in the beginning into the full on heat at the end. Spectacular imagery. :)
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Oh! Thank you, Karen! You have brought a full on smile to my face! So kind of you to visit and post. :)
A   Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Hi Eileen, congratulation in Gail's "touching flame" contest... xox~ LINDA
Manassian Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:59 PM
Thanks, Linda....lovely to hear from you! :)
Roberts Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 2:23 AM
well done and congrats Eileen ...Seren
Manassian Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 2:43 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Seren. :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations on your winning place Eileen love xx
Manassian Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 2:43 AM
Thanks, Mandy! Sweet of you to post! :)
Hunter Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 10:20 AM
Watch out Eileen...you're liable to catch something on fire with this one. You have such passion...its always there in one way or another. I also wanted to say hi and take care of your lovely self if you don't hear from me for awhile...running circles here! But i hope to be able to stop in some...and post some too. Gotta run...Bye, bye!....Caleb
Hunter Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Ha...just read Becca's comment...she feels your passion too....Queen of Passion..;)
Hicks Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 10:33 PM
It sounds corny, but I wanna say, "This was smoking!". What a creative story you have painted... I liked how you portrayed yourself as a shy little mouse a-midst all the beautiful people... when in the end the flames were wanting you all along. Very well written!
Manassian Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 10:42 PM
Yea...he was just doing his dance to capture my attention! ;) Poetically speaking, that is! Hope all is well with you, Timothy! :) Thanks for your visits....they really are wonderful.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 1:31 AM
another wonderful write from you Eileen xx
Manassian Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Awwwww Mandy! I'm touched! XOXOXO
Sathasivam Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 11:29 PM
Excellent. Beautiful poem. Very deep writing. Enjoyed. Tfs
Manassian Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:50 PM
Thanks, Ravi. Beautiful is a great adjective. It made me happy! :)
Calubiran Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Nice Poem. I'll add as favorite. :3
Calubiran Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 8:36 PM
even though im not the sentimental/loving type. well i liked it anyways
Manassian Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:42 PM
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it enough to do that! :)
Morrison Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 5:57 PM
Oh my Goodness this is off the hook and beautiful. You out did yourself with this one. Kim
Manassian Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:43 PM
Thanks, Kim....I was wondering what to write and then I remembered campfire days and my fascination with the fire...the rest just flowed! :)
Seal Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 3:40 PM
WOW Eileen, this is a wildfire write, exceptional metaphor use. Have often witnessed this situation unfold. Excellent poem. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:44 PM
Wildfire....I like that, Richard. You are always so kind...I appreciate you visits!
Hendricks Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 3:27 PM
Explosive write, Queen of Passion. Off to faves for sure. Hey, this sizzler is the best entry I've seen thus far. Good luck, Eileen. Licia :-)
Hendricks Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 2:02 PM
Of course you may. You've earned it. I don't put too much score by placements in contests. Taste differs, after all. No mind where you're placed, if at all, because this is worth a double 7. Happy writing, my friend. Licia :-)
Manassian Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Wow!!! Can I keep that title? Queen of Passion! :) Well, Licia...thanks for the vote of confidence. I am sometimes surprised by the good reviews I get and then poor placement in the contest, so...I try not to get my hopes up! If you liked it...I'm HAPPY! :)
Bauer Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 2:31 PM
you are the queen of the poem of passion, my friend! this one is amazing!
Manassian Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Thanks, Ilene. I'm so happy to read this lovely post! :) You are amazing!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Wow, this is spectacular, another for my favorites. Simply beautiful!
Manassian Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 10:14 AM
And I'm so so grateful that you do, Richard! In fact, when you don't...something is wrong with my day! Ain't that the truth! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 8:56 AM
I'm confused! I visit you every day.
Manassian Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 1:20 PM
Richard....you're back! Missed your visits. Thanks for the lovely comment! Hugs
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