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Touched By Your Flame

Ripples of heat through your fingertips They light the flame that keeps me alive, The warmth of your breath on my two lips It is for this that I now do strive. Passion burns hot, as the flame licks high No cooling for us till fervent spent, As flames flicker round two bodies lie In ecstasy our spirits cement. Let no one destroy this love so strong The flame of life that fuels never fools, Let no one dare charge that love is wrong The memories where mind lingers rules. Two hearts two souls together as one Two bodies bound entwined conquered won. Contest entry: © Mandy Tams © Harry J Horsman collab

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Date: 6/6/2013 8:51:00 PM
congrats....Linda
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Date: 6/6/2013 7:21:00 AM
big congratulations on your grand win friend Mandy..its a very lovely poem..Have a nice day!! cheers!!!
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Date: 6/5/2013 6:24:00 AM
congrats on your win....:)
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Date: 6/5/2013 2:05:00 AM
well done Mandy and Harry, great write....Seren
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Date: 6/4/2013 6:56:00 PM
congrats on a great win Mandy
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Date: 6/4/2013 2:57:00 PM
Ooh Lah Lah... You GO GIRL
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Date: 5/25/2013 1:43:00 PM
It sounds like a fabulous forever love. I really enjoyed reading this. Not many find love so strong. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/24/2013 10:21:00 AM
wonderful sonnet Mandy....best wishes
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Date: 5/23/2013 7:05:00 PM
Masterpiece! Good luck you two....
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Date: 5/23/2013 1:28:00 PM
- I think I've said it before .... But .... Harry and you are a really a good team. - It's just absolutely gorgeous!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/23/2013 11:55:00 AM
This is a wonderful sonnet, you two! :) You write so well together! The admonition is one to heed! Good luck on the contest....xo
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Date: 5/23/2013 9:52:00 AM
A wonderful Sonnet here Mandy!Lovely read.Best wishes in the conteswt.
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