Touched

The train station was mostly empty.
The wooden bench was hard and uncomfortable;
I had no place else to sleep.
A rolled up newspaper was the best pillow I could find.

An old, worn out lady and her teenage son 
sat in the row of seats facing my bench.
He sat staring at me, while his muscles twitched,
his face contorted and grunt sounds emitted from his throat.

"Hi", he yells at me, causing echoes through the 
cavernous, empty train station.
"I'm sorry," she apologizes for her ward,
"He's a bit touched."
"I'm touched," he loudly repeats.

"Yeah", I say, sitting up, "What does that mean?"
"Well," she starts to answer ...
"No," I interrupt, "I want him to tell me."

"I'm touched," he shouts again.

"What does that mean", I repeat,
"What does it mean to be touched,
and how can I be touched, because I would like that."

A smile lights up his face as it bobs, twists and shakes uncontrollably.
He turns his whole body towards his Mother,
looks at her with a quizzical look on his face,
then turns back towards me.

"You can't be touched," he blurts out,
"You are normal ...I am different ... I am touched."

"Are you sure," I ask, leaning closer to his smiling face.
"Because I think you have been told something that is wrong."
Now both he and his Mother look at me intently;
she instinctively grabs a hold of his hand, studying me very closely.

I am aware that my appearances clearly indicate I am a homeless man.
I have not shaved in weeks.  I have not bathed in days.
I am wearing the same clothes I had on when I walked away from my home
and life six months ago.

"No," I continue, "Everyone else is different - you are normal."
"People only tell you you are different, because they are jealous,
they want to be like you, but they can't be.
You are the only normal person in the whole, entire world.
Everyone else is, a little touched."  And, I wink at him.

He lights up, rocks back and forth, laughs and guffaws.

I get up; walk over to the two of them; 
shake his trembling hand; and, kiss his mother on the cheek.

As I walk towards the exit, starting my journey back home,
I turn and see a policeman walking past the two strangers -
I barely hear the policeman say, "Good morning",
followed by the boy's loud, booming voice, gleefully shout,
"Hi, I am normal."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/26/2014 9:45:00 AM
A great story, congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/25/2014 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win for a wonderful, extremely powerful write. Just really beautiful! BRAVO!
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:17:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Joe.. This truly touches my heart.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:38:00 PM
tremendous narration with a pensive mood, joe.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 2/26/2012 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Touched" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 12:26:00 PM
CXongrats Joe on an outstanding second plce win for this profound poem .. truly touched...luv..
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Date: 2/25/2012 6:41:00 PM
Very real [as you always are] excellent story telling too! Congrad's on your win [I can totally see you doing this! WE are not learning disabled LOL I'd say toMY son THEY are creatively Challenged!] Light & Love
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Date: 2/23/2012 8:51:00 AM
sometimes, we are touched by intangible things, joe... this piece speaks of how the heart does that... a moving work of art.. best wishes and huggs! :)
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Date: 2/21/2012 2:15:00 PM
very very touching, pun intended! you've painted the scene so vividly i could picture every expression on each speaker's face. a wonderful poem!
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:53:00 AM
This poem sends a chill down my spine and legs.I love reading words when a gift is given.I read it twice,and the same feeling each time.X-celent write Joe!
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:17:00 AM
Excellent poem! I love how your words 'show' the scene as if the reader is right there.
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Virginia Mitchell
Date: 2/21/2012 10:18:00 AM
P.S. Good luck in the contest! :)
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