Touched

TOUCHED

Leaf-fall and countless specimens litter the grass.
Over my shoulder in her journey earthward
To become part of the pile on the sward
One leaf fell and touched me in her pass.

Elegantly shapely and surprisingly light,
I felt she consciously chose me from the crowd. 
On my shoulder she made a whisper loud
In her soft and noiseless flight,

As if she had decided, “It’s late in my lifetime 
But not too late to reach out anew
And touch someone. . . . . . .you.”
Then I felt the need to hold her beauty sublime.

And I looked closely at her on the sedge, 
Picked her up, marveled at her colours radiant,
Smoothed her delicate fabric pliant, 
Ran my fingers  over her gently curving edge. 

Of all those anonymous specimen leaves,
She will remember the touch of warm fingers.
Like someone in a crowd of strangers
Who comes momentarily into your life, then leaves.

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Entered in Debbie Guzzi's Contest    	Touched
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 4:53 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Touched" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 6:44 PM
dreamy unused words like [sward] {sedge]Excellent work with a difficult form TOO!And you know I can not resist double entrandre! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 7:17 PM
BEAUTIFUL, Sydney. Yes, I just love allegories, symbolism, personification, any of that GREAT Stuff in a poem!! Even the last word matches up with the noun!! thanks for referring me here. Luv, Andrea
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 4:21 PM
My dad used to tell me... angels aren't like tooth-fairies or santa clauses or easter bunnies. angels are regular people who happen to be there for you saying and doing the exact right thing when you most need someone saying and doing the exact right thing. I've known a few angels. This poem made me remember that. Beauty write, Syd, thanks. Namaste~N
Merryman Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 2:25 PM
I like this, Sydney. An interestingly, different view of a falling leaf. Kim
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