Touch Me - Dusk

Feel
the day
when my warmth
caressed your skin
and cocooned your heart
in blankets of soft smiles.
Gentle yet penetrating,
a balm that soothed life’s abrasions
with a rich elixir of summer
and a drizzle of sweet molten sunshine.

Re-live it and relay it back to me,
free me from this chilly-fingered grip
that squeezes the light from my eyes
and the colour from my breath.
Kiss me with soft shadows
and burnished highlights
that I may know
how it feels.
Touch me

…Dusk 



Sharon Tideswell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/29/2011 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations Sharon on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/29/2011 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations, Sharon :D! Have a great day ahead!
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:44:00 AM
thank you so much Sharon, and heehee, you just know me too well ;) now if there were a chocolate option hmmm...now you got me wishing there was one, lol :D happy to see you here :D hugs to you :D
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:16:00 AM
Wonderful write Sharon!Congrats on your win--kash
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:12:00 AM
Nicely done ...Congrats Sharon on your well deserved winning place.luv gautami
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:35:00 AM
Many congratulations Sharon on your win with this romantic piece. Most deserving of it's placing....:)
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful, Sharon. Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 4:45:00 AM
Congrats Sharon on your super win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch entry luv..
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Date: 4/28/2011 2:40:00 AM
Wow, you sure spoke to Dusk here so beautifully, Sharon-- if I were Dusk, I'd gladly give in to your request here! So many wonderful lines here like the "molten sunshine" and those of "soft shadows and burnished highlights"-- really loved those-- Super congrats on your win and really happy that you're writing when you are able to-- hugs your way :) btw, I totally agree with what M. Alpestris says about you :D!
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:50:00 PM
Congratulation Sharon on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/27/2011 11:38:00 AM
I have no idea what an etheree is, but this reads and flows so beautifully. Dusk in your part of the world must be amazing to inspire such a write! You are truly talented with words, I think there's no form you can't adapt to! Hmm...did I just give myself away with that? Haha, let's just say, I read a lot that's why! My thanks to you for stopping by my poems and for your awesome comments, made me smile. I'm glad you enjoyed reading them. By the way, anagrams are cool but my name isn't one ;).
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:22:00 PM
Such a splendid write Sharon.. good luck in Nette's contest with this theme.. I also wrote about Dusk.. the vocabulary is key in this piece presenting a beautiful aura luv.. certain to be chosen for the winners list..please please keep in touch...my friend..
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:18:00 PM
Great expressive work that reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..My mother died when I was fifteen months old and there were four boys and my dad to look after me..I ended up at my father's mother home in which she had another son with his five children so there were ten children for this 77 year old woman to care for and I was the baby of both families..She put me up for adoption..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2011 8:22:00 PM
Sharon, I am seeing some really good ones today about Dusk!! Yours is outstanding. I really love it. You met all the requirements I think for this contest and I expect to see this one up there HIGH. LUv, Andrea
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