Touch Me - Dusk

Dusk
we stir
hands in roam
adventurous
her scent captures me
teasing, her touch excites
meandering souls unite
curvaceously in dancing sync
such pertness allures, emotions run
quenched lips joyously grace, in kissing taste

cresting like breakers, rhythmical in soar
arching as hips grind, shadows abound
hands now clasped, sporadic sighs
loving chants of desire voiced
inner release erupts
implosion occurs
panting curbed
two in lie
content
Loved 






~*~ Touch Me - Dusk written by James Fraser for entry into Nette's ~*~
                     “TOUCH ME COUNT-UP AND DOWN” - Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/29/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations James on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:44:00 AM
This is an excellent write James!Congrats on your win--kash
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:04:00 AM
Dear James, Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:59:00 AM
~~sigh~~ oh yeah, congrats on your win James with this steamy number ( back to the cold shower)
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:58:00 AM
Many congrats, James : )
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:13:00 AM
many warm congrats for this win James
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Date: 4/28/2011 5:00:00 AM
Congrats James on your great win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry .. always amazing to read your words James.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch piece with luv..
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Date: 4/28/2011 3:29:00 AM
This sure is one passionate piece on Dusk, James; whew, what a sizzler! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:04:00 PM
Congratulation James on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/25/2011 1:22:00 PM
So "touching" in the romantic sense, James. Only you could bring true touch to dusk! Nette will love your entry as I do. Wishing you success! (And the green-haired monster was I. Wanted to surprise John with a new hair color and really did have to wear a wig at my wedding. Mom and I ran out and bought it quickly. It was streaked with blonde and brown. Maybe I'll scan it and send it to you. Did a great job covering up my mistake.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:38:00 AM
Sizzzzzzzle! Sizzzzzlle! Vivid. Creative. Provocative! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/19/2011 9:03:00 PM
Thinking along the same lines James as the love spills over into the dusk making this entry a great competitor luv.. good luck ..hot..
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:43:00 AM
Fantastic writing James, good luck with the contest
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Date: 4/18/2011 1:26:00 PM
Touch me, what a way to go with this one James ;) you got me smiling, I am sure this one will do good in Nette's contest.. Hope you are enjoying your time off work ;) x x
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Date: 4/18/2011 10:42:00 AM
a very creative write James, really enjoyed reading this one. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/18/2011 10:42:00 AM
oh wow, I'll be back, need a cold shower now,...............ok this is fantastic, should do well in the contest
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