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Touch Me - Dusk

Dusk we stir hands in roam adventurous her scent captures me teasing, her touch excites meandering souls unite curvaceously in dancing sync such pertness allures, emotions run quenched lips joyously grace, in kissing taste cresting like breakers, rhythmical in soar arching as hips grind, shadows abound hands now clasped, sporadic sighs loving chants of desire voiced inner release erupts implosion occurs panting curbed two in lie content Loved ~*~ Touch Me - Dusk written by James Fraser for entry into Nette's ~*~ “TOUCH ME COUNT-UP AND DOWN” - Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/29/2011 12:09:00 PM

Congratulations James on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 4/28/2011 11:44:00 AM

This is an excellent write James!Congrats on your win--kash

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/28/2011 10:04:00 AM

Dear James, Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/28/2011 9:59:00 AM

~~sigh~~ oh yeah, congrats on your win James with this steamy number ( back to the cold shower)

Jack Horne

Date: 4/28/2011 7:58:00 AM

Many congrats, James : )

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/28/2011 6:13:00 AM

many warm congrats for this win James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/28/2011 5:00:00 AM

Congrats James on your great win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry .. always amazing to read your words James.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch piece with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/28/2011 3:29:00 AM

This sure is one passionate piece on Dusk, James; whew, what a sizzler! Congrats on your win :)

John Freeman

Date: 4/27/2011 7:04:00 PM

Congratulation James on your success in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2011 1:22:00 PM

So "touching" in the romantic sense, James. Only you could bring true touch to dusk! Nette will love your entry as I do. Wishing you success! (And the green-haired monster was I. Wanted to surprise John with a new hair color and really did have to wear a wig at my wedding. Mom and I ran out and bought it quickly. It was streaked with blonde and brown. Maybe I'll scan it and send it to you. Did a great job covering up my mistake.) Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/24/2011 5:38:00 AM

Sizzzzzzzle! Sizzzzzlle! Vivid. Creative. Provocative! Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/19/2011 9:03:00 PM

Thinking along the same lines James as the love spills over into the dusk making this entry a great competitor luv.. good luck ..hot..

Shannon Deane

Date: 4/19/2011 11:43:00 AM

Fantastic writing James, good luck with the contest

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/18/2011 1:26:00 PM

Touch me, what a way to go with this one James ;) you got me smiling, I am sure this one will do good in Nette's contest.. Hope you are enjoying your time off work ;) x x

James Foulk

Date: 4/18/2011 10:42:00 AM

a very creative write James, really enjoyed reading this one. Good luck in the contest.

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/18/2011 10:42:00 AM

oh wow, I'll be back, need a cold shower now,...............ok this is fantastic, should do well in the contest