Touch Me-Sleep

By John Moses Freeman, Sorry Nette, I don't have means
of centering the poem on my post page.."Disparity"

~Cloud
   my dreams
   on serpent
   chain links create
   feelings of a time 
   when my backbone was mine
   I dream of another time
   when the world was really mine
   the lack of food has weaken my mind
   dream gift concludes, serpent chain links protrude
                    ~
~Reality, a dream’s fatality
   wickedly the fate syndrome  sets in
   world of the rich concepts’ excuse
   unemployed, beaten, flat broke
   signs and times have spoken
   my children await
   starvation’s fate
   no escape
   fate’s soul
   mate!!

For and in Honor of Nette Oncloud
And her first Contest: 
“Touch me, count up and down”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/1/2011 8:18:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Nette's fine contest John. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
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Date: 4/29/2011 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations Moses on your win in Nette's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:15:00 PM
A creative write John, congrats on the win
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:48:00 AM
Very creative write.Liked it..Congrats John on your win in this contest..gautami
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:48:00 AM
Very poignant indeed!Congrats John on your win in the contest---kash
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:11:00 AM
Your poem is so poignant and moving, John. Awesome work here! Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:01:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest John, great job!
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Date: 4/28/2011 8:06:00 AM
Many congrats, John : )
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:14:00 AM
many warm congrats for this win, Moses
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Date: 4/28/2011 5:05:00 AM
Congrats Moses my friend on your great win in Nette's contest with this lovely delight and exquisite entry luv.. your words continually awesome luv... enjoy another top ten victory..
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Date: 4/28/2011 3:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win on this very interesting poem, John :) Enjoyed this :D
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Date: 4/26/2011 9:26:00 AM
love the constrast... so sharp
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Date: 4/26/2011 6:33:00 AM
wow. this is absolutely wonderful! I love so many lines that if I wrote them down for you I'd be repeating your entire poem! I'm sure you'll do well in the contest!
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:45:00 AM
OK! Contest over, John won!!!! ha ha ha!!! U have a contest next and I will TRY 2 pay tribute to u!! Excellent write! Happy Easter! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/23/2011 4:33:00 PM
boy john, her picture really inspired you!I like this poem about Nette.It's a very fun read.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:22:00 PM
Nette is sure to love this one, John. You made this complex form flow so well. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:53:00 AM
Amazingly brilliant stuff and so sweeeeet ..nette will be sooo happy.Good luck John..Gautami
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:56:00 PM
This is a great entry John, it made me smile.. I am quite sure Nette will love it.. Good luck to you ;)
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:56:00 PM
a great write john.
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