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Touch Grass



The sun sinks slow when dreaded dark overflows giving mere mortals moments to reflect all that passes in the day these moments take away and each influence intrinsically inspect we have known of old the conflict we are told is the battle between bad and good what is right, what is wrong, we must make morals strong gain empathy, love, and brotherhood if we could just see with our eyes set free, only hear when wind whispers silent songs there might be a better you, maybe a kinder me in the wisdom of these quiet sing-alongs a mother bird feeds her babies and I hear the words rhythmic refrains ringing peace into my heart 'His eye is on the sparrows’,and more of you He knows comfort “every little thing is gonna be all right’ emparts Turn down the power.. if just for an hour... sit still and hear nature sing
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Derden Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 5:27 PM
Your poem beautifully captures the essence of introspection and finding peace in nature. You skillfully use the setting sun as a metaphor for a time of reflection, urging us to consider our actions and embrace empathy.
Woods Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 7:12 AM
Thank you for your interpretation! I love it! Xo
Kendrick Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
Woods Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Tysm! Xo
Kulkarni Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 1:47 PM
Your poem carries such a profound message, Crystol. It’s true—when we pause and truly listen, nature does sing. I really enjoyed reading your work! -Smita
Woods Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, I appreciate the visit and encouragement! Xo
Xiang Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful. If only we could be jays sitting on a wire turning off their iphones. What was once natural is now an art. Thank you for a reminder of what is lost can still be gained.
Woods Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 7:09 AM
Ty! Xo
Grubb Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 2:37 PM
A very nice read, Crystol. Enjoyed so much. Congrats on POTD!!
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 11:22 PM
Thank you very much! Xo
Nicole Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 1:20 PM
' every little thing is gonna be all right. ' These words echo in my world. So comforting, indeed. I think to myself, let go and let God. The Serenity Prayer is a perfect reminder of that. It helps in many ways. Your thoughts are beautiful and uplifting. So encouraging. Congratulations Crystol, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 2:30 PM
I so appreciate your comments Brandy! "Brandy your a fine girl"... lol. I love the message of the serenity prayer. And that song by Marley has always turned the gray sky blue for me. Xo
Rodgers Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:45 PM
Dearest Crystol, Your words always touch me deeply. Just seeing nature’s quiet wisdom with the hope of being human is just beautiful. I felt like I just wanted to pause, reflect, and listen to your world’s gentle lessons. Your words inspire me to seek peace and empathy, even in the smallest moments. Congratulations on POTD and so much more. Spring Blessings, Dear Crystol, Daniel
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 2:28 PM
You're wonderful Daniel! You have such a gift of edification and poetic words. You are definitely on the right path of you hope to touch the hearts of mankind with your gentle ways. Tysm! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 10:37 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "Touch Grass" write again. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win..........
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Thank you so much!!! Xo
Turner Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 5:17 AM
Outstanding!! Congratulations on POTD honors. Most deserving, Crystol. A joy to read.
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:21 PM
That's so sweet ty! Xo
Jones Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 3:33 AM
A lovely potd! Congratulations!
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Ty Karen! I'm so happy! Xo
Winter Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 2:47 AM
Dear Crystol, congratulations on POTD! Your poem is like a beautiful sunbeam! Best, Anne
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Tysm! Xoxo
Seeker Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 2:28 AM
Stunningly beautiful! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Crystal. Relevant message, we would all do well to heed.
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Tysm... I'm so honored and validated...I felt this poem was good... like it's one of those you write and say, " where did that come from!?" Lol xo
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 1:33 AM
- Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. ... enjoy, today is your "sunshine day", Crystol :) - hugs
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Oh wow! How exciting! Tysm...xo
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June 3, 2025 at 1:00 AM
Congratulations on receiving poem of the day Crystol, your poem is simply beautiful, wise and wonderful… Beryl
Woods Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 12:18 PM
Thank you so much! I'm so excited because this poem means so much to me! I really out my heart and soul into it. Xo
Andresen Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 5:16 AM
- The magic of silence ... it has its own language - a language that speaks directly to us when we dare to listen - giving us the opportunity to hear what we often ignore: our own thoughts, feelings and needs ... a wonderful poem, Crystol :) - hugs
Woods Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 1:07 PM
Thanks so much Annelise...I really enjoyed yours! xoxo
Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:07 AM
Dear Crystol, your poem is absolutely stunning in every way! Your exquisite poetic expression is rich, tender, vibrant, contemplative, meaningful and just a pure joy to take into one's mind, heart and soul. I especially adored these poetic moments "sun sinks slow when dreaded dark overflows' and "if we could just see with our eyes set free", and the whole third stanza... But every line is deep and beautiful. A fav for me! Warmest wishes, my inspiring poet friend.. ~Susan
Woods Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Wow high praise indeed And very humbling! You've given me so much happiness by telling me this, thank you! Is there anything as warming as knowing the words we write have touched another soul?! Thank you so so much again! Xoxo
Goldsmith Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 10:41 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Touch Grass" write. Love your ending. A must do for peace... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
Woods Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 4:45 PM
I agree Paula, and tysm! Xoxo <3
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