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Touch - Sharon's Acrostic

Tomatoes on their cheek Oranges in smile Usher a morning streak Children in the aisle Heaven on earth awhile ------------------------------- June 27, 2017

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Jean Murray

Date: 6/29/2017 5:58:00 AM

Your poems always encourage me to visualise what you are seeing Probir. With this I see you beam.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/28/2017 7:49:00 AM

Nice acrostic, Probir. Good luck my friend:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/28/2017 3:59:00 AM

Delightfully done my friend, Probir! Touching!

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/28/2017 6:46:00 AM

Perhaps not as delightfully as you do! ... But I too try to ... The rest with the empathic readers like you ... thank you ...

Rob Carmack

Date: 6/27/2017 10:52:00 PM

I like this Probir, good luck in the contest.

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 11:16:00 PM

Thank you, rob

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/27/2017 3:03:00 PM

This is sweet Probir. Nice rhyming too :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 11:16:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi ...

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/27/2017 1:20:00 PM

Good rhyming cadence Probir, best wishes..

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 11:19:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie ...

Barry Stebbings

Date: 6/27/2017 12:44:00 PM

Very nice, Probir. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry.

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 11:20:00 PM

Thank you, Barry ...

Chris Green

Date: 6/27/2017 12:39:00 PM

This was nice Probir. I like the rhyming factor in this. Nicely done.

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 11:22:00 PM

Thank you, Chris ...