Total Surrender

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Total surrender, breath by breath Watching reflex instinct Desires rise, then swoon into death Save bliss throbs, with love inked In the divine wicker Pure heart our moniker Love flame does not flicker Soft prayers render Total surrender 01-December-2021 Quietus

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/1/2021 5:13:00 AM

Such divine bliss in total surrender!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/1/2021 6:26:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/30/2021 9:31:00 PM

These two lines would have been more than adequate to make a wonderful missive "Pure heart our moniker Love flame does not flicker" The rest is gravy on the mashed potatoes.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/1/2021 6:27:00 AM

Hahaha! Thanks Caren! Need to fill up the Quietus 9 lines!