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Tossing Chips

Oh, What A Piddily Day I Whittled It Away On Some Unnecessary Chips On My Shoulders & In My Dips ... Written & Copyrighted ©: 9/12/2013 by: MoonBee Canady

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/14/2013 10:58:00 PM

MoonBee...the "in" consonate repeats....BRILLIANT! creates a cohesive feather to this classic! Line 1 is amazing open! To mine faves! Jimbo

Moonbee Canady
Date: 9/15/2013 1:53:00 PM

Thanks Jimbo -always appreciate your insightful retrospect ... (and my dictionary was trying to tell me Piddidly was not a word - 'course I knew better ... I learned it at an early age -lol ... chack you later ... Moonie