Tornado Warning

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Under tornado watch again...

. tornado warning high wind twister possible death approaches now

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Matthew Anish

Date: 1/29/2012 3:55:00 PM

Reminds of the movie "Twister" which was out a few years ago. You stuck to the 5 7 5 combination in your fine haiku - which is all to the good. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/26/2012 7:13:00 AM

Oh dear I do hope you are okay- do you live in the Kansas region - I was in America 2 years ago in Kansas they called it hurricane alley. Nice Haiku, Blessings, Bren

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/24/2012 8:54:00 AM

Your creativity is precious, tornado warns possibility of death. Cute imagination, loved. bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2012 11:41:00 PM

You must have just had a warning ? Do they happen a lot in winter? Yes, it would cause someone to be inspired to write a haiku just like this!! Wish I could see lots of poems but my computer is acting up. I sure hope I don't have another big problem!!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/23/2012 2:10:00 PM

wow, scary piece, Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/23/2012 2:04:00 PM

That's an eerie thought. Good haiku, Sara. Love, Kim