Bob Quigley Poet Lanterne

Tornado

Tornado


Storm
coming
wind has changed
in the cellar
run


Glass
breaking
house destroyed
we have been spared
pray




Written for nette onclaud's "Turn On the Lanterne" contest
Bob Quigley

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Margaret Foster September 9, 2011 at 10:01 PM I feel the tension here Bob. well written. Thank you for reading and commenting to me. cheers Marg Bob Quigley September 11, 2011 at 12:21 AM And to you as well. Thank you

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 10:30 PM You told a great story with the occupants of the house being spared and praying with gratitude in the end of it all. Luv, andrea Bob Quigley September 8, 2011 at 10:42 PM Thank you maam. Very kind

Sara Kendrick September 8, 2011 at 12:55 PM Enjoyed this one..Creative work indeed..Thanks so much for the kind review of my work..Sara Bob Quigley September 8, 2011 at 10:43 PM Thanks Sara and my remarks were well earned

Doris Culverhouse September 8, 2011 at 12:13 PM great work on the picture....I have seen so many different ones and they are all great!! I love it! Nette choose a fantastic subject!! Bob Quigley September 8, 2011 at 10:43 PM I appreciate your comments Doris. Thank you

Caryl Ramsdale September 6, 2011 at 4:54 PM Thank goodness it passed by...lol I really like this one. Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges my friend. CR Bob Quigley September 8, 2011 at 10:30 AM Gotta learn to keep your head down Caryl

Debbie Guzzi September 6, 2011 at 11:54 AM so many frightening things happening around the world! Hope you and yours are safe! Light & Love Bob Quigley September 6, 2011 at 1:02 PM I'll take the light We were three days without power. Life's great up here in the woods.