Tornado

Tornado Storm coming wind has changed in the cellar run Glass breaking house destroyed we have been spared pray Written for nette onclaud's "Turn On the Lanterne" contest Bob Quigley

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Margaret Foster

Date: 9/9/2011 10:01:00 PM

I feel the tension here Bob. well written. Thank you for reading and commenting to me. cheers Marg

Bob Quigley
Date: 9/11/2011 12:21:00 AM

And to you as well. Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 10:30:00 PM

You told a great story with the occupants of the house being spared and praying with gratitude in the end of it all. Luv, andrea

Bob Quigley
Date: 9/8/2011 10:42:00 PM

Thank you maam. Very kind

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/8/2011 12:55:00 PM

Enjoyed this one..Creative work indeed..Thanks so much for the kind review of my work..Sara

Bob Quigley
Date: 9/8/2011 10:43:00 PM

Thanks Sara and my remarks were well earned

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/8/2011 12:13:00 PM

great work on the picture....I have seen so many different ones and they are all great!! I love it! Nette choose a fantastic subject!!

Bob Quigley
Date: 9/8/2011 10:43:00 PM

I appreciate your comments Doris. Thank you

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/6/2011 4:54:00 PM

Thank goodness it passed by...lol I really like this one. Good luck in the "TURN ON THE LANTERNE” poetry contest as nette judges my friend. CR

Bob Quigley
Date: 9/8/2011 10:30:00 AM

Gotta learn to keep your head down Caryl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/6/2011 11:54:00 AM

so many frightening things happening around the world! Hope you and yours are safe! Light & Love

Bob Quigley
Date: 9/6/2011 1:02:00 PM

I'll take the light We were three days without power. Life's great up here in the woods.