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Torn Curtains Blowing

My dream is taking me back- back to my old home, the room that was mine is now faded in time; torn curtains are blowing in the wind while I roam. In the open window- I hesitate then climb, I stand silent in the stillness with reflection; the room that was mine is now faded in time. Such sweet memories I hold to my heart with affection, I can hear the laughter of grandma and mother; I stand silent in the stillness with reflection. Once that floor was shiny where I played with brother, all my dollies used to wait on my bed for me; I can hear the laughter of grandma and mother. Beyond those tattered curtains flowers I would see, I think those days in this home were my very best; all my dollies used to wait on my bed for me. I feel sleepy- so lay down in my old nest, my dream is taking me back- back to my old home; I think my days in this home were my very best, torn curtains are blowing in the wind while I roam. ___________________ August 25, 2017 Poetry/Terzanelle/Torn Curtains Blowing Copyright Protected, ID 17-933-613-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Blowing in the Wind sponsor, Nicola Byrne First Place
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Roberts Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 5:02 PM
My Dear Broken Wings, Splendid imagery . so glad you could fly home, congrats
Schiavina Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations! Beautiful poem.
Krampe Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Congrats on your win!
Bradfield Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Excellent! A fine win well deserved!
Roper Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Back to congratulate you on a great win Eve ~`*
Parker Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:59 PM
nice poem Constance, you captured a lost lifetime, we tend to see these memories as sacred ground.Congratulations
Swartz Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 3:06 PM
This is great great stuff! Memories always seem so much more beautiful once they are written down. Congratulations on your well deserved placing in the contest but also for writing such an amazing piece.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 1:00 PM
This piece moved me, just wonderful, and congrats on this well deserved 1st place:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 10:42 AM
A lovely terzanelle! Congrats on your top win, Constance!
Cozart Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 9:51 AM
This is gorgeous. Congrats on your win.
Gentile Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations to you as well, Broken Wings, Torn Curtains Blowing is a beautiful reminiscence! xxxoo
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:37 AM
Lovely poem--Congrats BW on your top win!
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings :)
Sands Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 6:27 PM
A great Terzanelle written Broken Wings. It brings the reader right there too :)
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 6:21 PM
I love the serene feeling in this poem, Broken Wings.. reminds me of a few places I lived growing up... luck in the contest. ~*
Wanter Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:44 PM
This took me back to my own room and later on white organdy curtains blowing over our first bedroom. Loved it!
Emu Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:22 PM
Nicely done, gave way to nostalgia in the readers emotions. All the best. Craig
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