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Under her blanket of protection, she lies still to escape detection. As shadows gather in the moonlight, anxiety adds a chill to the night. Her heart's pounding in a rush of fear, apprehensive that he may be near. And she waits for the doorknob to turn, igniting hate's indelible burn. The door creeks open, her eyes snap shut, and panic ties a knot in her gut. As her panties get slowly pulled down, the tears flow, and she wishes she'd drown. Slipping into shock, the games begin as fingers stroke her shivering skin. And late in the night, he breaks her heart, innocence dies, and trust falls apart. A father molests his precious pearl, numb to the pain of his little girl. And her mother, blind to his deceit, doesn't suspect that her man might mistreat. (Rhyme) 4/12/2017

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Date: 5/25/2018 7:48:00 PM
Horrific thoughts of a father's betrayal and abuse.
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Date: 5/25/2018 7:54:00 PM
Thanks Line I appreciate your words of support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/16/2017 6:30:00 PM
OMG, sent chills thru me.I wrote a few pieces on this subject Alcohol, Market Place, Echoes Out of time, Broken, and a few others on the subject. But you captured it to a T :) going to fav's
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Date: 4/17/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Debbie, for taking the time to give me such a encouraging and supportive review, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2017 11:15:00 AM
Well done Emile, A bold and courageous piece. heartbreaking; I applaud you for addressing such a terrible topic. You did it in a straightforward yet poetic way. Again I say well done.
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Date: 4/13/2017 11:21:00 AM
Thanks so much Edward, I welcome your comments and appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 4/13/2017 7:31:00 AM
Sigh! You have penned a great poem Emile. You are really the voice of the voiceless. Well done.
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Date: 4/13/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, I welcome your comments and appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 4/12/2017 4:28:00 PM
Emile, I stand in awe as the truth tears through the poetic excellence, leaving the reader sorting through a mosaic of emotions! A revealing, courageous masterpiece! a7
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Date: 4/12/2017 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Chuck, for taking the time to give me such a encouraging and supportive review, Emile.
Date: 4/12/2017 3:28:00 PM
Your imagery is chilling with this absolutely heartbreaking scenario which sadly is all too real for some children. The final stanza brought tears to my eyes:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2017 6:41:00 PM
I am touched by your words, and I am humbled by your praise. Thank you Jan. Emile.
Date: 4/12/2017 3:18:00 PM
Emile you have addressed a very real issue in Society with courage and truth. So very heartbreaking. Yet, As the photo says, we may be the voice for the voiceless. Well done :)
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Date: 4/12/2017 6:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, I welcome your comments and appreciate your support, Emile.

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