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Below is the poem entitled TORMENT which was written by poet Ja Ja. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Each day I lay, in this place
Surrounded by my thoughts
Without a way, to move or speak
While my body slowly rots

Every single day and night
I pray to meet my death
Curse this vile, tube and pump
Forcing into me, my breathe

If I could only disconnect
This tube that pumps my air
I’d gladly leave, this earthly Hell
To liberate, my pained despair

No bonds would hold me back	
My soul would be set free
And soaring up, to heaven’s gate
I’d be let in, by Thee
BOEMS BY JA 520          

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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