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Topless Surfer

This summer, my twin met a surfer guy,
wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly.
Funny, had a bush so thick,
thought he’d impress his new chick,
his topless humor made her wave goodbye.

Copyright © Ink Empress | Year Posted 2024

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August 26, 2024 at 8:45 AM

Dear Ink, I am delighted by the witty imagery of your limerick! I especially enjoyed "wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly." - wow! That paints a fun and vivid picture for sure! A fabulous giggle-worthy limerick. Congratulations for your win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

August 19, 2024 at 2:06 PM

Glad to see yours in top three, sweetie. Congrats

Paula Goldsmith

August 18, 2024 at 2:37 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh..... Have a fun day writing away...................

August 18, 2024 at 9:16 AM

Ink, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

August 9, 2024 at 4:04 AM

Hahaha. We definitely don't want the ones that try to impress us like that. I kept wondering which of the bushes were thick. Lovely humour Dear Ink. You can write anything.

August 2, 2024 at 12:22 AM

excellent, smiled about subtle image yann

Eileen Manassian

August 1, 2024 at 9:49 PM

Oh dear oh dear oh dear... must have been a Middle Eastern man! Good one! :)

August 1, 2024 at 10:30 AM

Good one, Inky, and funny too! Even in a short limerick your skill at creating unforgettable imagery is impressive! Always look forward to your poetic creations. I am never disappointed. Thanks for the giggle! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings. You have a smart twin!!!

August 1, 2024 at 1:32 PM

Awwn samszy! I miss having you read my poems! You are such a kind soul! So happy to see you in comments thank you so much and glad you found this funny! Haha he was no rock star but a rapstar hahah

August 1, 2024 at 8:29 AM

ha! I love the humor in this one....bright shorts looking like a dragon fly

August 1, 2024 at 1:36 PM

Awn thank you so much so glad you enjoyed this

Daniel Henry Rodgers

August 1, 2024 at 5:40 AM

Dear Empress, I laughed out loud reading your amazing humor. I needed your poem today to lift bring a smile to my face. I am always thankful for your poems. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

August 1, 2024 at 1:43 PM

Ah thank you so much dear daniel, you are ever so kind for appreciating also my limericks . Im truly grateful for your selfless support always

August 1, 2024 at 4:12 AM

Your humorous side Ink empress, is so good to see and fun to read! The image you paint with your words does seem cause for a quick wave goodbye, lol! Happy Thursday xxoo

August 1, 2024 at 1:45 PM

Ah thats so kind of you to say dear mike thank you so much for your generous support always truly grateful

Victor Buhagiar

August 1, 2024 at 1:53 AM

This is great fun. Loved your limerick.

August 1, 2024 at 1:48 PM

Thank you dear victor always grateful for your kindness

July 31, 2024 at 9:33 PM

Oh no, a real story? What imagery! Lol.

August 1, 2024 at 1:54 PM

Awwn haha i tried sweet anaya, it is inspired by a real story theres more to this story haha thank you for dropping by i appreciate you

Mystic Rose Rose

July 31, 2024 at 6:48 PM

Some like them hairy some not lol good one Ink

August 1, 2024 at 2:03 PM

Awwn thank you sweet rose

Andrea Dietrich

July 31, 2024 at 1:13 PM

Funny one, INk. I have to tell you something in Soupmail!!

August 1, 2024 at 2:04 PM

I hope you did smile as you write limericks so well. Thank you sweet Andrea

July 31, 2024 at 12:54 PM

Very clever Ink, with just the right balance of wordplay and cheeky humour that a really good Limerick needs to be impactful, love the (wave) at the end, cheers David

August 1, 2024 at 2:05 PM

Dear DK, thank you so much for your visit and for your detailed comment: I actually thought of the last line last minute after posting: and im so glad you thought it was worth adding “ wave” thank you so much once again grateful

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 31, 2024 at 11:49 AM

Hello Ink Express, i do not blame her. Huge. Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 4, 2024 at 8:57 AM

Hello Ink Express, I am thank you. I hope you are well to. You are welcome. I appreciate your visit to. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

August 1, 2024 at 2:14 PM

Awn thank you dear Darlene hope you are well appreciate your kind visit

July 31, 2024 at 11:30 AM

LOL made me laugh!

August 1, 2024 at 2:20 PM

Awwn sweet paige thank you so much

July 31, 2024 at 10:06 AM

I can imagine. Way to go with this one. Thank you for sharing. Sara K

August 1, 2024 at 2:24 PM

Thank you dear sara always

Joseph P. DiMino

July 31, 2024 at 9:42 AM

Flash over substance. Smart twin! Runs in the family I think.

August 1, 2024 at 2:27 PM

Ah thank you dear joe appreciate your support always

July 31, 2024 at 7:23 AM

Sooo comical, I can imagine how this guy looked ... lols, real good one, ink!

August 1, 2024 at 2:29 PM

awwn thank you dear nette

Lioness Onpaper

July 31, 2024 at 6:48 AM

Hahahhahaha !!! wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly. That hit the spot gooooood!!!! Funny, had a bush so thick, I died with this bush line !!! topless humor made her wave goodbye. Mmmm well deserved goodbye!!! Thank u next !!! Hahahha love it!!

July 31, 2024 at 7:13 AM

Hahah yes. Not the kind of jokes some would appreciate ..

July 31, 2024 at 5:19 AM

Eeks on so many accounts…lol

July 31, 2024 at 7:13 AM

Haha thank you dear kim for reading

The Aura Rhymes

July 31, 2024 at 4:07 AM

How could you reveal your twins secret ? Love this limerick . Miss writing habibi limericks .

July 31, 2024 at 4:19 AM

Hahaha i miss too . Post one here

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