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Inspired by a real story

This summer, my twin met a surfer guy, wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly. Funny, had a bush so thick, thought he’d impress his new chick, his topless humor made her wave goodbye.

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Date: 8/26/2024 8:45:00 AM
Dear Ink, I am delighted by the witty imagery of your limerick! I especially enjoyed "wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly." - wow! That paints a fun and vivid picture for sure! A fabulous giggle-worthy limerick. Congratulations for your win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/19/2024 2:06:00 PM
Glad to see yours in top three, sweetie. Congrats
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Date: 8/18/2024 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh.....  Have a fun day writing away...................
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Date: 8/18/2024 9:16:00 AM
Ink, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.
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Date: 8/9/2024 4:04:00 AM
Hahaha. We definitely don't want the ones that try to impress us like that. I kept wondering which of the bushes were thick. Lovely humour Dear Ink. You can write anything.
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Date: 8/2/2024 12:22:00 AM
excellent, smiled about subtle image yann
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Date: 8/1/2024 9:49:00 PM
Oh dear oh dear oh dear... must have been a Middle Eastern man! Good one! :)
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Date: 8/1/2024 10:30:00 AM
Good one, Inky, and funny too! Even in a short limerick your skill at creating unforgettable imagery is impressive! Always look forward to your poetic creations. I am never disappointed. Thanks for the giggle! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings. You have a smart twin!!!
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Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 1:32:00 PM
Awwn samszy! I miss having you read my poems! You are such a kind soul! So happy to see you in comments thank you so much and glad you found this funny! Haha he was no rock star but a rapstar hahah
Date: 8/1/2024 8:29:00 AM
ha! I love the humor in this one....bright shorts looking like a dragon fly
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Date: 8/1/2024 1:36:00 PM
Awn thank you so much so glad you enjoyed this
Date: 8/1/2024 5:40:00 AM
Dear Empress, I laughed out loud reading your amazing humor. I needed your poem today to lift bring a smile to my face. I am always thankful for your poems. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/1/2024 1:43:00 PM
Ah thank you so much dear daniel, you are ever so kind for appreciating also my limericks . Im truly grateful for your selfless support always
Date: 8/1/2024 4:12:00 AM
Your humorous side Ink empress, is so good to see and fun to read! The image you paint with your words does seem cause for a quick wave goodbye, lol! Happy Thursday xxoo
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Date: 8/1/2024 1:45:00 PM
Ah thats so kind of you to say dear mike thank you so much for your generous support always truly grateful
Date: 8/1/2024 1:53:00 AM
This is great fun. Loved your limerick.
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Date: 8/1/2024 1:48:00 PM
Thank you dear victor always grateful for your kindness
Date: 7/31/2024 9:33:00 PM
Oh no, a real story? What imagery! Lol.
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Date: 8/1/2024 1:54:00 PM
Awwn haha i tried sweet anaya, it is inspired by a real story theres more to this story haha thank you for dropping by i appreciate you
Date: 7/31/2024 6:48:00 PM
Some like them hairy some not lol good one Ink
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:03:00 PM
Awwn thank you sweet rose
Date: 7/31/2024 1:13:00 PM
Funny one, INk. I have to tell you something in Soupmail!!
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:04:00 PM
I hope you did smile as you write limericks so well. Thank you sweet Andrea
Date: 7/31/2024 12:54:00 PM
Very clever Ink, with just the right balance of wordplay and cheeky humour that a really good Limerick needs to be impactful, love the (wave) at the end, cheers David
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:05:00 PM
Dear DK, thank you so much for your visit and for your detailed comment: I actually thought of the last line last minute after posting: and im so glad you thought it was worth adding “ wave” thank you so much once again grateful
Date: 7/31/2024 11:49:00 AM
Hello Ink Express, i do not blame her. Huge. Darlene/
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Date: 8/4/2024 8:57:00 AM
Hello Ink Express, I am thank you. I hope you are well to. You are welcome. I appreciate your visit to. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:14:00 PM
Awn thank you dear Darlene hope you are well appreciate your kind visit
Date: 7/31/2024 11:30:00 AM
LOL made me laugh!
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:20:00 PM
Awwn sweet paige thank you so much
Date: 7/31/2024 10:06:00 AM
I can imagine. Way to go with this one. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:24:00 PM
Thank you dear sara always
Date: 7/31/2024 9:42:00 AM
Flash over substance. Smart twin! Runs in the family I think.
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:27:00 PM
Ah thank you dear joe appreciate your support always
Date: 7/31/2024 7:23:00 AM
Sooo comical, I can imagine how this guy looked ... lols, real good one, ink!
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Date: 8/1/2024 2:29:00 PM
awwn thank you dear nette
Date: 7/31/2024 6:48:00 AM
Hahahhahaha !!! wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly. That hit the spot gooooood!!!! Funny, had a bush so thick, I died with this bush line !!! topless humor made her wave goodbye. Mmmm well deserved goodbye!!! Thank u next !!! Hahahha love it!!
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Date: 7/31/2024 7:13:00 AM
Hahah yes. Not the kind of jokes some would appreciate ..
Date: 7/31/2024 5:19:00 AM
Eeks on so many accounts…lol
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Date: 7/31/2024 7:13:00 AM
Haha thank you dear kim for reading
Date: 7/31/2024 4:07:00 AM
How could you reveal your twins secret ? Love this limerick . Miss writing habibi limericks .
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Date: 7/31/2024 4:19:00 AM
Hahaha i miss too . Post one here

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