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Inspired by a real story

This summer, my twin met a surfer guy,
wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly.
Funny, had a bush so thick,
thought he’d impress his new chick,
his topless humor made her wave goodbye.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2024 8:45:00 AM

Dear Ink, I am delighted by the witty imagery of your limerick! I especially enjoyed "wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly." - wow! That paints a fun and vivid picture for sure! A fabulous giggle-worthy limerick. Congratulations for your win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2024 2:06:00 PM

Glad to see yours in top three, sweetie. Congrats

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2024 2:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh..... Have a fun day writing away...................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/18/2024 9:16:00 AM

Ink, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

Tonye George

Date: 8/9/2024 4:04:00 AM

Hahaha. We definitely don't want the ones that try to impress us like that. I kept wondering which of the bushes were thick. Lovely humour Dear Ink. You can write anything.

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/2/2024 12:22:00 AM

excellent, smiled about subtle image yann

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/1/2024 9:49:00 PM

Oh dear oh dear oh dear... must have been a Middle Eastern man! Good one! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/1/2024 10:30:00 AM

Good one, Inky, and funny too! Even in a short limerick your skill at creating unforgettable imagery is impressive! Always look forward to your poetic creations. I am never disappointed. Thanks for the giggle! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings. You have a smart twin!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 1:32:00 PM

Awwn samszy! I miss having you read my poems! You are such a kind soul! So happy to see you in comments thank you so much and glad you found this funny! Haha he was no rock star but a rapstar hahah

Marugu Mo

Date: 8/1/2024 8:29:00 AM

ha! I love the humor in this one....bright shorts looking like a dragon fly

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 1:36:00 PM

Awn thank you so much so glad you enjoyed this

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/1/2024 5:40:00 AM

Dear Empress, I laughed out loud reading your amazing humor. I needed your poem today to lift bring a smile to my face. I am always thankful for your poems. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 1:43:00 PM

Ah thank you so much dear daniel, you are ever so kind for appreciating also my limericks . Im truly grateful for your selfless support always

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/1/2024 4:12:00 AM

Your humorous side Ink empress, is so good to see and fun to read! The image you paint with your words does seem cause for a quick wave goodbye, lol! Happy Thursday xxoo

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 1:45:00 PM

Ah thats so kind of you to say dear mike thank you so much for your generous support always truly grateful

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/1/2024 1:53:00 AM

This is great fun. Loved your limerick.

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 1:48:00 PM

Thank you dear victor always grateful for your kindness

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/31/2024 9:33:00 PM

Oh no, a real story? What imagery! Lol.

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 1:54:00 PM

Awwn haha i tried sweet anaya, it is inspired by a real story theres more to this story haha thank you for dropping by i appreciate you

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/31/2024 6:48:00 PM

Some like them hairy some not lol good one Ink

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 2:03:00 PM

Awwn thank you sweet rose

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2024 1:13:00 PM

Funny one, INk. I have to tell you something in Soupmail!!

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 2:04:00 PM

I hope you did smile as you write limericks so well. Thank you sweet Andrea

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/31/2024 12:54:00 PM

Very clever Ink, with just the right balance of wordplay and cheeky humour that a really good Limerick needs to be impactful, love the (wave) at the end, cheers David

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 2:05:00 PM

Dear DK, thank you so much for your visit and for your detailed comment: I actually thought of the last line last minute after posting: and im so glad you thought it was worth adding “ wave” thank you so much once again grateful

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/31/2024 11:49:00 AM

Hello Ink Express, i do not blame her. Huge. Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2024 8:57:00 AM

Hello Ink Express, I am thank you. I hope you are well to. You are welcome. I appreciate your visit to. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 2:14:00 PM

Awn thank you dear Darlene hope you are well appreciate your kind visit

Paige Hind

Date: 7/31/2024 11:30:00 AM

LOL made me laugh!

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 2:20:00 PM

Awwn sweet paige thank you so much

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2024 10:06:00 AM

I can imagine. Way to go with this one. Thank you for sharing. Sara K

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 2:24:00 PM

Thank you dear sara always

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/31/2024 9:42:00 AM

Flash over substance. Smart twin! Runs in the family I think.

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 2:27:00 PM

Ah thank you dear joe appreciate your support always

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2024 7:23:00 AM

Sooo comical, I can imagine how this guy looked ... lols, real good one, ink!

Ink Empress
Date: 8/1/2024 2:29:00 PM

awwn thank you dear nette

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 7/31/2024 6:48:00 AM

Hahahhahaha !!! wearing bright shorts, looked like a dragonfly. That hit the spot gooooood!!!! Funny, had a bush so thick, I died with this bush line !!! topless humor made her wave goodbye. Mmmm well deserved goodbye!!! Thank u next !!! Hahahha love it!!

Ink Empress
Date: 7/31/2024 7:13:00 AM

Hahah yes. Not the kind of jokes some would appreciate ..