Too Thin
I see your ember devouring the void,
brittle flames thrashing in the black—
a thing of hunger, of flickering edges,
too thin to hold the weight of your fire.
I watch as your heat distorts the air,
turning breath into a shimmer of ruin.
You are light, you are rage—
a blaze that burns but cannot warm.
I stand, still, in the shadows you carve,
helpless against the conflagration.
You flare against the far horizon—
I see, but my hands will never reach.
Copyright © Laura Breidenthal | Year Posted 2025
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