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Too Thin

I see your ember devouring the void, brittle flames thrashing in the black— a thing of hunger, of flickering edges, too thin to hold the weight of your fire. I watch as your heat distorts the air, turning breath into a shimmer of ruin. You are light, you are rage— a blaze that burns but cannot warm. I stand, still, in the shadows you carve, helpless against the conflagration. You flare against the far horizon— I see, but my hands will never reach.

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Date: 2/17/2025 6:33:00 AM
Laura, this had to be difficult to watch unfold. I am really so sorry you had to experience this. An event like this really does threaten our sense of security and calmness. This is one reason why we all need to focus on making every day productive and fulfilling. However, I think many will need to mourn for a while. It's a huge loss in many respects. We're really very small beings in nature's grand scheme of things, which is a difficult concept for some. I know you get it!. Thanks for this one.
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Date: 1/21/2025 9:47:00 AM
This is beautiful, what a gift you have my friend in captivating the mind to seek beyond
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/22/2025 12:33:00 PM
Thank you for reading! This is a very personal poem, I felt the need to share. Much love!

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