Too Soon Gone

The air drips over the lake
yet to be thundered awake. 
Mirages waver.
Bare feet on black asphalt quake
Keepers on sand tractors rake. 
That's summer's flavor.
Swimsuit wearers all partake
of young beauties and beef cake
as love is a savior.

Dip the babies toes, savor
the lake's cool icy laver,
hear her giggles rise.
See the lover's sink braver
and the old ones disfavor
soon to end July.
Scorched red by Sun's engraver.
Father's garden hose wavers.
Soon, summer good bye's.

August crisps the field's allies.
Summer's guests leave compromised.
The lifeguard's gone. 
It's too hot for much but sighs.
The town theater's cool as ice,
from the heat in drawn.
Watch the actor's prance in guise
Fall with have it's own surprise,
Too soon, summer's gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/10/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Virelai" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2012 11:12:00 AM
Hey Debi ,congratulations on your big win in the contest!
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Date: 8/7/2012 10:43:00 AM
Wow, you captured the feelings of childhood summer days! Summer always flew by and school days moved slower than a snail...now, everyday flies by. Congrats on a wonderful won, Debbie! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely win.
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie. Another great win for you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/7/2012 9:07:00 AM
a summer feast, debbie.. congrats all the way!..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:36:00 AM
Congrats on the win! Jag
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:04:00 AM
Debbie big congrats on your winning poem, this might sound a bit odd but I love the end of summer, the Autumn is my favourite time of year and it is already happening were I live..well done...David
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:39:00 AM
So true - summer never lasts long enough. wonderful descriptions, especially liked dipping the baby toes in :) (btw, fall WILL have it's own surprise?)
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Date: 6/24/2012 1:22:00 PM
Love summer but not when it is to hot. This body is more used to cold than heat. I have been very busy with traveling to babysit my one grandson 3 days a week and home 4. Seems hard to get things done. On holidays this week so heading to BC to visit my brother and family. Had the kids home for the weekend and they just headed back home. Thanks for asking -I am fine just busy at the moment. love phyl
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Date: 6/23/2012 8:21:00 PM
winter here has a bit of bite, goodly sleepin weather of a nite, aint complainin.. right
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Date: 6/23/2012 2:53:00 PM
sorry girl,dont cry it'll come again,nice write Debbie
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Date: 6/23/2012 11:15:00 AM
I liked this poem. You rekindle some fond memories. When one is old, one at least has some memories. Thanks for sharing your work with us, Carpe Diem, Jancarl
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Date: 6/23/2012 11:11:00 AM
Well done images of summer. Summer her lasts for 6-7 months. I miss the autumn in New England.
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Date: 6/22/2012 10:30:00 PM
Are old poems permitted in your contest. Debs? I have one that I'd like to enter. (not the one I am talking about below here)
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Date: 6/22/2012 10:06:00 PM
Hey, I have an old poem with a very similar title, well completely differently done, but same theme. This is wonderful to see, Debs. And a good inspiration for your contest which I am finding a challenge to do for you. HOpefully I will pump one out. But I don't know! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:35:00 PM
Hahahaha!!!! So enjoyed this. Yuppers. Summer flies, especially here in Canuck land! I am loving teaching my girl about the seasons. Though she just turned 3, she is aware that there are 4, each with their individual pleasures. My favourite time of year is September. I LOVE the month- light sweaters, warm days, crisp nights, shopping for pencils. The dusks still linger, but the humidity has disappeared...still July has its charms, yes? Like sharing gelato with tiny spoons, movies in the park...
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:37:00 PM
Come to think of it, I once enjoyed 'free' Shakespear in the park, here in Waterloo... they collected donations in a hat after the production. The actors were fabulous. And seeing Midsummer Night's Dream in a natural setting was awesome. We have lots of free festivals here- Jazz, blues, Scottish, Multicultural (tomorrow!) and Busker ... all free...
Date: 6/22/2012 3:42:00 PM
An awesome write, Debbie, I am much impressed. -Mohammad
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