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*Someone one of late said that the way of a kind poet with integrity is one with tender and gentle poetry.  I say if they are a hater of others, then...they are a tender genteel hater!  LOL. Do we all have a little narci in us? That is the question.  :)

Too Old To Be A Narci!

When beauty’s gone bye bye and slack flesh becks Jowls, crow’s feet, graveled voice and turkey necks Too old to be a narcissist what’s left is a pacifist *Tender genteel haters do not make good peaceniks!
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Velasco Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Haha, this had me grinning! So witty and true — aging with attitude and a sense of humor is a win. Loved the 'genteel haters' line!"
Anaya Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 9:16 PM
Rowena, it delights me to see you laughing! Y e s! Exactly, if we can't laugh at ourselves we're in a dire condition, Ty, dear poetess.
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:43 PM
Interesting read! "turkey necks" I liked it. However, not against anyone.
Anaya Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 8:00 PM
Nothing against narcissist 's either. Anaya Narci! ; )
Baker Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:02 PM
LOL at last line, Anaya. Nice Limerick, my friend. Bill
Anaya Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 4:05 PM
Tender lickn good, lol. Bill, delighted to put a smile on you.
Gorelick Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 11:46 AM
You inspired me to write my brilliant limerick on narcissisms. I loved it, hope you do too! Best, Mr. Humblest
Anaya Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 11:51 AM
LOLOL!!! @ your vanity. My adorable narci~
Narain Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Nice thoughts.
Anaya Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Nice narci! LOL. Ty Jay~
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