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Too Much To Lose, Now I'M Behind Bars Blues

Let me tell you my story about my behind bars blues For doing something I shouldn't, now too much to lose It all happened quite a few years ago when I was a boy sixteen Living on the Dublin estates, where you had to be part of the scene Gangs became part of the culture, live here you'll see what I mean Generation after generation, it appears to be in our genes I close my eyes to recall, whilst a shiver runs down my spine As I follow my steps that night, still scared of what I'll find We, me and my gang, readily terrorised our streets Frightened of no one we were, no matter whom we'd meet Then came that Friday night down at the local bar and grill A Rock Band played in the corner, Thin Lizzy, their guitars spill Next thing all hell breaks loose, a rival gang enters en masse No prisoners were taken, no creed, colour or class Amidst the chaotic scenes you could hear the flick of a blade Into flesh that was previously perfect, a member makes his grade Scattered echoes resonate, shouting and cursing extends Screams of fading life bellows, as another knife internally bends Broken glass now glistens in pools of crimson red Dishevelled clothed creatures, lie punctured close to dead Sirens out of nowwhere wail, flashing blues descend Another Friday night downtown, societies current trend I stand in frenzied stare, a redded steel gripped in my hand Me becoming one of many, that a parent had never planned At sixteen years old I have been taken, but I see another day There were three on that fateful night, who never came back to play Liberty was never a word, that ever entered our thoughts Or even the others we inflicked, whom we brought to nought The day I stood in the dock, knowing behind bars blues were near At sixteen years old going inside, it's now my turn to fear * For Miranda's "Behind Bars Blues" contest *

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Date: 6/25/2011 11:31:00 AM
A riveting verse re: the culture today. I enjoyed
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Date: 6/21/2011 12:58:00 PM
Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you for all your recent wins : )
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Date: 6/21/2011 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Randa's "Behind Bars Blues" contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2011 3:24:00 AM
Wow and double wow, James!! It's evident you put a lot of effort into this smooth piece. Congratulations on your placement in Miranda's contest. It's certainly a well-deserved one. :))
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Date: 6/18/2011 11:20:00 AM
James, substance abuse seems to be the primary cause teens land in jail. Great write here! Congratulations on your success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:54:00 AM
A sad tale indeed and a sad future for that 16 year old. LCongratulations James on a great entry and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congrats James on your HM in the contest for this superior write and entry luv..enjoy ..
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Date: 6/18/2011 10:20:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of miranda, james
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:33:00 PM
Ow myy what a story..i have goose bumps...i could capture the scene you've created..powerful!
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:14:00 PM
Wow, powerful write, James. I laughed at the Sherwood comment LOL
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:30:00 AM
There are no bounds to your creativity, please don't stop writing, can't wait to read more...
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Date: 6/8/2011 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Shannon, I intend to post many more as the days, weeks, months and years pass :) smiles 4 u
Date: 6/7/2011 7:08:00 PM
very creative and well written. thank you for commenting on Free Apples.
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:28:00 AM
A well done story poem. Good luck in the contest. Mike
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:05:00 AM
a well done narrative. I enjoyed the tough guy being taken down in the end, not by another person, but by fear. good luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/5/2011 12:35:00 PM
gripping in every way, james... a well-told story filled with attentive details! :) winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/5/2011 12:35:00 PM
Hey there James, this has a true to life feeling to it, not sure if it is the case or not. Your amazing images brought this piece back to life. Good luck for the contest :) *hugs from a cold Cape Town*
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