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Too Much Sunbathing

Well done
In sun.

Kim Merryman
7/6/15
 for Judy Konos One Footle contest

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Mary Rotman

Date: 8/5/2015 7:04:00 PM

Very cute.

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/26/2015 4:23:00 PM

I missed this great footle of your, Kim! LOVE IT :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:48:00 PM

Thank you, Laura!

Len Gasun

Date: 7/26/2015 9:41:00 AM

Excellent terse verse this is my dear friend, Kim. I like it so much and the form is great. Hope I can try this form so soon. I'm so glad to read it this evening. Thank you so much for sharing and belated warm congratulations on your win. I'm also stopping by to thank you so much for appreciating and acknowledging my poem in your contest. God bless you. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:50:00 PM

Thank you, Leonora, for your sweet comments!

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/23/2015 3:12:00 PM

Congrats on your great win Kim

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/27/2015 4:49:00 PM

Thank you, Njeri!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/11/2015 5:33:00 PM

I have yet to try my hand at this fun form - you make it seem so effortless! Congratulations on a lovely win for a very clever write! It's definitely a 7! Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Pandita

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:54:00 PM

Thank you, Pandita! You are so sweet!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/11/2015 4:23:00 PM

Put a fork in it, it's done, and perfect for my appetite, what a clever footle ;)

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:55:00 PM

Ha!Ha!Ha! Thank you for the comment, Casarah!

Constance La France

Date: 7/11/2015 1:06:00 PM

Kim, this is delightful, fun for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, Gods love . . .

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:57:00 PM

Thank you, Constance and you are welcome!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/10/2015 10:15:00 PM

With two lines you summed it all up. Congratulations on your win and thanks for the comment on my Villanelle.

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:58:00 PM

Thank you, Ralph, and you are welcome!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/10/2015 4:17:00 PM

Congrats Kim, on your win, cute one... ~Caryl

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:59:00 PM

Thank you, Caryl!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/10/2015 3:44:00 PM

Better rare or medium!! Too much sun is dangerous! Congrats on this merited win, Kim:) // paul

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 9:00:00 PM

Thank you, Paul! In my foolish youth I embraced the sun's rays too much, but I am much wiser now.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/10/2015 2:23:00 PM

excellent Kim.....congrats

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 9:01:00 PM

Thanks, Tim!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2015 1:55:00 AM

KIM, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FOOTLE WIN........ LINDA

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, Linda!

Julia Ward

Date: 7/10/2015 1:29:00 AM

In the words of your poem, "well done", Kim... Julia, xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 9:03:00 PM

Lol! Thank you, Julia!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/10/2015 12:50:00 AM

Back to say well done, Kim. Viv x

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 9:04:00 PM

Thank you, Viv!

Skat A

Date: 7/10/2015 12:32:00 AM

KIM, Awesome footle. Love ~SKAT~

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:52:00 PM

Thank you, Skat!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/9/2015 10:45:00 PM

Kim, congrats on your awesome win:-) Alexis

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:52:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/9/2015 10:04:00 PM

Ready to be served...:-))). Congrats, Kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:50:00 PM

Ha!Ha! Thanks, Kim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2015 9:41:00 PM

Yep, that will do it!! Congrats on the win, Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:49:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2015 5:14:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:48:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2015 2:02:00 PM

- Been there .... more than well done :)) - Luck in contest, Kim - hug // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/11/2015 8:47:00 PM

I've been there too, but not for a very long time. Thanks for commenting, Anne-Lise!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/8/2015 2:48:00 PM

Nice one and good luck in the contest. love phyl

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 6:39:00 PM

Thanks, Phyl!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/7/2015 1:52:00 PM

A wonderful write fo the contest.........A.M.

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 6:37:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2015 1:11:00 AM

lol good luck Kim:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 6:32:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/6/2015 10:02:00 PM

Great footle, Kim. Good luck in the contest. Viv x

Lee Carter

Date: 7/6/2015 9:35:00 PM

Cute!

Kim Merryman
Date: 7/8/2015 6:30:00 PM

Thanks, Lee!

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