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Too Much Pride (Self Discovery)

2 of us together always and forever Loving you as days go by never having a reason to cry no more sorrow no more pain nothing to lose everything to gain my friends they warn me they say that he's wild "listen you guys...i'm not a child" we go to the movies and then to the park, that's when i notice it's gotten very dark. he says that he loves me... there is nothing to fear. Sweet Jesus help me... he is getting too near! all that i have is my friends and my pride, and i am not afraid of the feelings that I hide!!! Kissing and hugging is all that i allow... i have too much pride to waste EVERYTHING now!!!!

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Date: 3/25/2016 2:09:00 PM
Renee, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2015 10:43:00 PM
Renee, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/6/2010 8:49:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Renee. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2010 4:50:00 PM
Love this write very much...thank you for sharing and for your work, Always Michael
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Date: 7/4/2010 4:41:00 PM
Oh the joy of new or young love or both..Keep the creative pen flowing..Welcome to soup hope that your stay will be long and happy with many new writes..Sara
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Date: 7/4/2010 3:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:09:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii .. on vacation.. AlohA..
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