Get Your Premium Membership

Too Much

It never rains it pours
One thing after another
Hardly time to catch her breath
Seems she’s caught in a whirlwind
Longing for a pause a break
Waiting for a clearing
Craving a getaway
To find an isolated stretch
Let out a primal scream
Release that pent-up energy
Frustrated to the core
It’s all too too much



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on August 10, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/11/2019 4:21:00 AM
It often feel this way. Well-captured, Line. :) gw
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2019 5:36:00 AM
What's the big rush, we've got to take more time to smell the pleasantries along the way. Thanks, Gershon.
Date: 8/11/2019 1:46:00 AM
Hey, Line. This is so true, panagiota
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2019 5:34:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Panagiota.
Date: 8/10/2019 9:43:00 AM
I can relate to this one. One thing after another, hardly time to catch her breath! Well done Line! :)
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 8/10/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry