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Written for the song " too late to save the world" by Glenn Hughes, this has been sitting on my notes for a while and finally posting, for the contest FUNK sponsored by Robert James L. 
And...This might also be my last poem for a while: thank you soupers for your support always: keep writing.

 

 

 

 

L i f e I sense your perplexed pulse within pirouetting pearls, steeped in sinister streaks, while fading sparks of dulcet stars swing from threads of darkness on the verge of vertigo, living in minutes caught in the crawling contradiction of tainted t i m e… O’ f r a g i l e hummingbird, I hear the hushed hymns hovering through the ebony haze, awaiting unlocked gates adorned with regal rubies, reflecting heaven that sings of the sacred. For in your lonely serenade, in bittersweet solitude, you raise fatigued feathers to the alluring azure, to heed the heartbeats of the halcyon haven, amidst your spirit drowning in dreariness, soaked in sadness, counting cursed crystals as blessings from the essence of this endless enigma~ d r e a m gliding in drowsiness, drenched in midnight terrors, flowing between technicolor tercets, etched in obsidian tears within the raven prose of Edgar Allen Poe, oblivious to the table set, serving chalices brimming with moonbeams and hope, as you’ve long tasted toxic embers from hellfires, in a satanic sphere that knows not the ingredients of peace, consumed with hate and prejudice, perhaps prewritten from ashes seized from the Hades inferno, a spring stolen from the valleys of dancing daffodils. So let me waltz beyond constellations of cruelty. It’s too late to save the world, to color the globe in lime green and blooming blue, as there is no winning when the devil sits on a throne of fickle flowers, where snakes slither through the narcissistic eyes of the emperor~ dressed in deception, eager to rule the weak and naive with nothing but the scorching heat of the serpentine sunsets, bleeding venomous verses upon your canvas that pleads and prays for compassionate clemency. I feel the rising of the merciful moon, embracing the wolverine warmth, filling the emptiness between wicked lines, k i s s e d by the weeping wind, as purple phrases across pastel pages, immortalize the poetic need to paint the world with l o v e and lilac...

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Date: 3/10/2025 5:12:00 PM
IE, it might be too late....I tend to think that's true. The way you portray the various forces of preservation vs destruction gives food for thought. I hope you are well and I applaud your courage for posting something so real as this is. Smiles...we'll never let anything remove our own inner sense of joy, love, and fulfillment.
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Date: 3/6/2025 8:03:00 PM
amazing write dear poet. congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!
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Date: 3/5/2025 3:52:00 AM
What a great way to close out a whole year of Glenn Hughes contests than with this memorable poem. You write so well. It’s time to move on… let’s try Iron Maiden!!! Btw, you were very close to another trophy win with this one.
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Date: 3/1/2025 5:59:00 AM
Still a struggle to find beauty and compassion amidst suffering.A great poem.Bye.
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Date: 3/3/2025 5:13:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and farewell comment too
Date: 3/1/2025 2:00:00 AM
Beautiful poetry as always Ink. There’s times we need to take a break from poetry, so much to do that often gets neglected. Come back soon… Beryl
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Date: 3/3/2025 5:14:00 AM
Dear beryl, poetic soul, i never took a break from poetry, i am on other platforms, took a break from soup as i needed peace and solace. But im back now thank you so much
Date: 2/28/2025 10:25:00 AM
The World shall not be saved from it's own eagerness. I like the sober emotions that craft this poem, and I like very much that opening vision, "I sense your perplexed pulse through pirouetting pearls..." Goodbye Poetess...until the Future awakes...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/3/2025 6:04:00 AM
Thank you for your poetic farewell and kind feedback , truly grateful for your kind support
Date: 2/28/2025 7:15:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress, your words are that healing halo of hope which envelop everyone's aching heart and possess the power of erasing away all the pain.. your poetry is a true cathartic elixir and I wish that you always keep painting the magical symphony of your metaphors and never let those "serpentine sunsets" steal the serenity from your sublime verses...and please do take as much time you need, but I'm sure, the sparkles of poetry will never cease to drip from your fingertips, and they never should! I won't say that I'll miss reading your words, that's because I never stop reading them, haha, do I?? Neverrr !! I'm and will always remain a forever fan of your art, my fairy goddess. And I hope you come back here soon ~ (and I'll follow you around, haha) — coming back to the poem,
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Date: 3/3/2025 6:08:00 AM
My angelic star, no words can express or describe how grateful i am for your support! Thank you for always being so kind and so encouraging! I appreciate your generous feedback and love always
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Date: 2/28/2025 7:18:00 AM
"as you’ve long tasted toxic embers from hellfires, in a satanic sphere that knows not the ingredients of peace, consumed with hate and prejudice" Gosh, these words pierce hard as they come from a very deep place! "It’s too late to save the world, to color the globe in lime green and blooming blue, as there is no winning when the devil sits on a throne of fickle flowers... " Sigh.. unfortunately this is the truth, no matter how hard we try to keep that flame of faith alive, this world has fallen to hard.. but still, I believe, even if we can create some cinders of solitude from all the ashes.. we should do it for our own sake! Powerfully described! This poem is going in my faves... so much said within these layers... keep writing and shining always!!
Date: 2/27/2025 8:15:00 PM
Empress, dear one, “The Game Is Afoot”hearts everywhere too maimed to expose the would-be king without his clothes as he tries on chaos to tire the populace into Escapes, just in case he is the rising anti-Christ & these are the lamenting days before Our Most Holy Lord comes back again…I’m Fav-ing this astounding, prophetic poem. God be with you in the light always on your peace leave. xox your pal sal
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Date: 3/3/2025 6:47:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comment poetic soul! I appreciate always your kind support
Date: 2/27/2025 11:29:00 AM
I always enjoy reading your wonderful writes. Maybe your golden pen needs a vacation. I find time off can be a good thing. You and your golden pen still have way toooooo much to write. Your readers need to hear from you both. Hope you are OK... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 3/3/2025 7:22:00 AM
Thank you always for your kind support, truly grateful
Date: 2/27/2025 9:41:00 AM
i adore the communion, with the nature, in every image , so enticing poetry for ever, thanks poet
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Date: 3/3/2025 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind support truly
Date: 2/27/2025 3:18:00 AM
Hello Ink, this is so sad, I will miss reading your beautiful and unique poetry. Loved the ending of this poem. Wishing you all the best, my friend.
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Date: 3/3/2025 8:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comment truly, im grateful and they mean alot to me
Date: 2/27/2025 1:14:00 AM
- So sad ... you will be missed, Ink ... "k i s s e d by the weeping wind, as purple phrases across pastel pages, immortalize the poetic need to paint the world with l o v e and lilac" - hugs
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Date: 3/3/2025 9:11:00 AM
Thank you dear anne lise for supporting me from the very start of my journey here on soup, im grateful always
Date: 2/26/2025 9:09:00 PM
Bad news! I shall miss you. Your powerful poem like a storm! Yet, your last lines are great! Good luck and best wishes :-)
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Date: 3/3/2025 9:15:00 AM
Thank you so much dear abdullah i appreciate always your kindness and support
Date: 2/26/2025 7:16:00 PM
Dearest Inky, Ive tried to put in a comment 3 times and it keeps saying its a system error, when I put in my full comment. Weird..Hugs
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Date: 3/3/2025 9:16:00 AM
Ah it happens to me alot too dear beautiful maria, its ok, i appreciate you always
Date: 2/26/2025 5:55:00 PM
oh my goodness Ink Empress this is so powerfully penned dripping with alliteration and your trademark use of colour. I especially like the stanza "So let me waltz beyond constellations of cruelty"... and the uplifting ending of the poem. write on Ink, I truly understand the need to take a break for soup but don't leave it too long before you are back. hugs jan x
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Date: 3/3/2025 9:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging comment i am grateful for your support truly
Date: 2/26/2025 5:35:00 PM
Dearest Ink, Your excellent poetry delves into the complexities of life, the interplay of beauty and misery, and the need for hope in adversity. It explores the fragility of existence, the fight against darkness, and the need for love and compassion in a terrible world. The poem's language is colorful and expressive, with a mix of tranquil and gloomy imagery. Words like "hushed hymns," "toxic fires," and "venomous lines" paint a vivid emotional picture. The usage of fractured words (such as "time" and "love") underlines the themes of disorder and desire. Best wishes for the contest. Warm hugs!
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Date: 3/3/2025 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and detailed comment, im grateful always for your support truly
Date: 2/26/2025 2:25:00 PM
OMG, I entered the Glenn Hughes song and someone screeching 'a cover' made me upset, lol. Why is it soo difficult to open a FUNK tune? Erg."counting cursed crystals as blessings from the essence of this endless enigma~ d r e a m gliding in drowsiness, drenched in midnight terrors, flowing between technicolor tercets, etched in obsidian tears within the raven prose of Edgar Allen Poe" you really do pour your heart and soul into your poetry, some can't even comprehend the desire, the passion, and the hard work that goes into them and the coolest, neatest displays. You make it look yes 'so easy' ha my dear. Hoping for a last trophy win for you, if you are really going on vaca. send you off with another one! Enjoy your precious time princess* Empress, Ink! xhugs ~Anaya
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Date: 3/3/2025 10:04:00 AM
Haha who did the cover? Thats quite funny! I hope robert will see my response to you here, and give another the trophy. Someone that deserves it, Its always nice to give different people a chance: i dont want to be the trophy bagger running with trophies and leaving others looking at me thinkin " but she makes no sense" hahah. Dear sweet anaya. I appreciate your kindness you are always quick to spread light. Sending you back light.
Date: 2/26/2025 2:06:00 PM
I will miss you and your beautiful poems. This last one has a sense of an end, too. It's lovingly written. I'll fav. Please return.
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Date: 3/3/2025 11:24:00 AM
I will miss you always sweet hilda thank you always for being so kind
Date: 2/26/2025 12:08:00 PM
I am really going to miss you! :( This leaves beauty - as all your poems do. Please don't stop your writing, even as you take your absence. Your words are so important -don't you see how many people they touch? Love, just me <3
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Date: 3/3/2025 11:35:00 AM
I am so touched by you sweet soul! I hope you know soupers are very grateful for your selfless support! You are so sincere and i feel your kindness from miles. Sending you light today and always
Date: 2/26/2025 10:22:00 AM
Quite a sad verse IE, sometimes all we have is a prayer and hope, we should never give up on it. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/26/2025 8:12:00 AM
Oh so sad ! Will miss . But why last poem for a while?
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