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Why Didn'T I Stop

The blood is gushing out I don't know what I have done you say it isn't right but I wish it wasn't wrong the blade keeps touching my wrist I don't know what I have become I wish I could just stop but it's too late the light has already come

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/4/2017 8:23:00 AM

Do not confuse eternal darkness with the light. I have been prayed for you today. As poets we can through our imagination live many lives. Even if our own reality is bleak. We can reside in happier places. Through our pen and imagination we can landscape our mind and rewrite our reality. Try writing about the girl you want to be. Once you imagine you can find the way to become her.

Daisy Tyrrell
Date: 11/4/2017 2:56:00 PM

thankyou so much i will work on that now x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/3/2017 7:02:00 PM

Hopeful your poetry heals all wounds!

Kelli White

Date: 11/3/2017 5:45:00 PM

You are one of Gods' children. Do not ever forget this. Your pain And loneliness is felt by so many souls. You will survive. For the angel of light is on her way to you as I write these words. I shall not allow you to suffer anymore.

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 11/3/2017 5:36:00 PM

Its never to late so long as you have a pulse. Never hurt the 1 you Love or Yourself.