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My dear ones departed and dreams denied Forge the torrent that drowns my heart As pride stole my chance to say the words That I meant for them from the start To have held them fast within my arms Then so cherished each precious clutch And not regret saying far, FAR too late That I loved them ... so terribly much. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Writing Challenge 1, September 2019 - Eight Line Form" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart - Wishkobi Ode, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 9/12/2019 1:00:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Gregory ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2019 4:41:00 PM
wow, what an awesome poem, Greg. Short but so packed with importance. Congrats, buddy.
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