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Too Far Gone

dinner dark
             like blackened corn on a husk
mother hits me with the blunt force of leftover liver
             frying pan bled
             densely knotted
             unanchored from Julia Child cuisine 

mother's radical rejection of normal kid food
            that punches through my faith in parenting

meal of grievance
          tough liver that dents gravity
          that requires self sacrifice 
          unsettling 
                   like imperishable grief
do I let go of my fears?
          for a factory-floor meal
          gone to the dogs
          (if only I had one!)





Poem composed July 17/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 9/4/2022 4:00:00 PM
OOOhhh!! Whoa!! What a meal set before the husband? children? I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/4/2022 6:52:00 PM
Hello Sara, Your visits + comments on my small postings are a fresh breeze on a steamy day. Thanks very much for your note. Be well. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 8/10/2022 9:07:00 PM
Oh, you really do make me laugh! Elizabeth
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/11/2022 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, Elizabeth. My attempts at humor seldom register in contests so I am pleased that you found merit in my poem. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 7/20/2022 3:25:00 AM
I agree with Maureen, here. I love it, too. Am led through a labyrinth of foody thoughts of grievance, yet food.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/20/2022 6:38:00 AM
My appreciation for your positive take on my foody memories of liver dinners. For the record, my mother was superb at baking cookies, tarts, pies. There's much poetic license in my small piece. Thank you for the stop by. Brian
Date: 7/18/2022 12:58:00 PM
I love this poem.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/18/2022 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen. I value your affirmative message as my attempts at humor often fall flat. Best wishes, Brian

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