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Too Far Gone

It hangs upon the precipice: once lethal, looming by design. A stalwart, buttressed edifice, the press of time has not been kind. The howling seas, like dogs of war, have savaged once proud prominence. The cliffs that thwarted all before, succumbed to tidal dominance. With shoulders squared, and jaw tight clenched: no further; here, the line was drawn. The hounds at bay, thus firm entrenched, a costly, lasting truce was spawned. By blood, by sweat, a people saved to live out days beyond these walls. There on the battlements engraved, vita pro omni, life for all. Ironic, then; ‘twas built to last. Uncaring, time just marches on. A crumbled vestige of the past, no rescue now; it’s too far gone. ---------- for the Pick-A-Title, Vol 31 Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh written on 07/10/2022

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Date: 8/1/2022 9:29:00 AM
You have a command of words, Jeff, and use them powerfully. Your picture was painted so graphically in your poem, I'm at a loss for words large enough to express their beauty. Congratulations!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 8/1/2022 12:26:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words, Ann. I enjoyed thinking about this topic…
Date: 7/31/2022 12:41:00 PM
A well-written, terrific quatrain, Jeff. Thanks for introducing me to a new phrase today("vita pro omni"). Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 8/1/2022 12:27:00 PM
Thanks so much for hosting the contest, Edward. I really enjoyed it.
Date: 7/31/2022 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your ending. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Date: 7/10/2022 7:29:00 PM
Yes, exceptional verse... Wolf-wit(less) comment: The Titanic was built to last as well. ~ Eye C. Berg
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Date: 7/10/2022 1:53:00 PM
I agree with Milton Jeff, this is exceptional. I always enjoy reading your poetry Jeff. Great emotional impact in your words that I felt. Blessings xxoo
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/10/2022 7:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie, that means a lot
Date: 7/10/2022 9:54:00 AM
Very fine. No, exceptional! I see Edward really liking this one, Jeff. And rightly so!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/10/2022 10:47:00 AM
Thanks, Milt - you are always very gracious and encouraging...

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