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Too Brief

A butterfly's flutter is brief, no joy in death's relief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/16/2016 7:37:00 PM
This is short and bittersweet. BIG congrats on it, Joseph.
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Date: 10/15/2016 2:19:00 PM
Twisting and turning, well done.
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Date: 10/15/2016 1:31:00 AM
cheers to you on your winning slot, jay!..huggs
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Date: 10/14/2016 10:59:00 PM
A life ending is so sad. Well penned. Congrats.
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Date: 10/14/2016 8:19:00 PM
Congratulations Joseph. Well done...
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Date: 10/14/2016 8:02:00 PM
We exert ourselves in life and then it's over. Congrats, Joseph!
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Date: 10/14/2016 7:31:00 PM
Concise and profound! Congrats on your win, Joseph. Janice
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Date: 10/14/2016 6:18:00 PM
An amazing thought, Joseph. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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