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Tony the Pony

Our friends invited us to their farm,
And were introduced to Tony 
Their pony, who had delectable charm,
On his forehead was a star,
Which I noticed from afar,
He had already spotted spotted me,
From way beyond the cedar tree.
He stole my heart, 
Right from the start,
He seemed incredibly tame, 
Wanting to play a game,
I was advised not to touch 
Him too much,
Lest he bite 
And give me a fright,
But sure, it was furthest from his mind,
For he looked adorable and so kind.
He gently nuzzled into my hand,
As his hooves kicked
And sprayed up sand,
He was such a soothing sight,
Was sure I'd dream of him tonight.
Was also advised not to give him food,
But could see he was eying my apple,
And in the mood,
For a tasty munch,
I gave it to him, and he finished
It with a loud crunch.
Sunday arrived, it was time to leave,
Tony ever so slightly, tugged 
At my cardigan sleeve,
We fondly looked at one another,
Though we had never known each other.
Tony, I said, whilst stroking his nose,
He stood beside me ever so close,
I hear you are soon to be a dad,
You must feel very proud and glad,
I'm sure you and your lady
Will adore your baby foal
Who will steal your heart,
As you did mine from the start.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 8:00 PM
delightful, Jennifer. I enjoyed this read.
Proxenos Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 3:19 AM
Thank you so much Line best wishes, stay safe, Jennifer.
Horne Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 2:59 PM
awwww, beautiful
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March 22, 2019 at 3:14 PM
Thank-you Jack, glad you read part one, this is where I fell in love with Tony the Pony. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Ball Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 11:53 AM
A well deserved POTD Jennifer. Loved this poetic story. Really good imagery. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
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March 18, 2019 at 4:08 PM
So glad you enjoyed it Judy - and thank-you for a lovely comment. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Lindley Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 8:21 AM
Belated congratulations my dear friend on this very fine poem being honored with POTD honors here at the Soup....
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March 18, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Thank-you Robert, Only saw you comment today - it was the most wonderful surprise - poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 31, 2019 at 5:10 AM
Well I was privileged to be shown a photo of Tony and he is cute and adorable. I love horses, so this will be on my Favourite List. Kim
Proxenos Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Thanks Kim, A lovely comment. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 8:41 PM
This is so adorable I could just pinch its 'poetic cheek!' Light as a feather and happy as a lark. Just right. A FAVE for me, Jennifer. Great one. :) gw
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January 30, 2019 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Gershon - and I have just been sent a photo of Tony and his fillies baby foal - he is absolutely angelic looking! Will one day get around to adding illustrations/pics. to many of my poems! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 11:33 PM
Hello Jennifer … affectionate animals always tug at the heart strings Jennifer. If well looked after they offer much pleasure. Nice read Jennifer - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 7:35 AM
This pony stole my heart. He stood next to me for a good hour. I have always loved horses, not that I have ever ridden on one or owned one but Connie mentioned in her comment to me that horses can read our minds, then Tony must have known I immediately loved him. Thanks for the comment Lindsay, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 6:47 PM
Awe, such a sweet poem. Your thoughts made my heart smile. :) You and Tony the Pony made a connection right away. This is beautiful and tender. Congratulations Jennifer, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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January 22, 2019 at 12:20 AM
We certainly did Nicole, he was and is so adorable, I cant wait to see his foal, its a boy! Thank-you for the congrats for POTD - much appreciated and thank you for a lovely comment. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 21, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Sorry I missed this fun poem, belated congrats on POTD, Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 12:22 AM
No problem Charles , thank you for the congrats, they still mean as much as if I got them on the day! Keep well my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 21, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Such an adorable poem, Jennifer! Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD honor! Hugs, Sandra
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January 22, 2019 at 12:32 AM
The pony was adorable that is why I had to get a poem down on paper the soonest! Thank-you for my congratulations Sandra, it was an honor! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 2:11 AM
what a fun poem Jennifer, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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January 21, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Thank you Jan, I was very pleasantly surprised at the honour bestowed on me yesterday, and, that I was not aware of, until I opened my computer and saw my first congrat. from Alexis. It really was quite a thrill! Pleased you enjoyed the poem, he really was and is the most adorable pony I have ever seen! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 20, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Horses communicate with humans by reading our minds and through your poem I could sense your connection with Tony. I adored your poem Jennifer. Congratulations on having it deservedly honored for POTD! : ) xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 11:58 PM
I didn't know that Connie, then they must know that I love horses - in England when we went three years ago, I stroked the nose of one of the horses when it was the changing of the guard outside 10 Downing street and signs were up everywhere, don't touch the horses they bite, but I was right in front and the only thing separating us was the rope they put up to keep the tourists at bay. Well this horse turned and looked at me as though he he understood I loved him and was not afraid. That horse made my holiday so much lovelier! thank-you for a lovely comment and your congratulations, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 20, 2019 at 2:12 PM
- I understand well, he stole your heart Jennifer ... a nice weekend :) - A lovely poem, I enjoy reading tonight :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 12:01 AM
He did Sunshine Smile as did another horse in England as I explained to Connie above. Thank you for your kind congratulations, poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Raven Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Hi Jennifer, dropping by with my congratulations on your well-deserved Poem Of The Day honour with this wonderful write. Congratulations. Have a wonderful week ahead. Hugs....Mike. XX
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 2:05 PM
Thank-you Vladislav, thank you for your visit, your wonderful comment and your congratulations. Poetry wishes, Jennifer
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January 20, 2019 at 12:31 PM
I love the structure and tone of your poem Jennifer. Its love magnified in an adorable manner.
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:53 PM
Thank-you Okonkwo, a very lovely comment, and very nice to meet you. Thank-you for your visit, Poetry wishes, Jennifer
Warrior Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 10:57 AM
One trick Pony lol...Congrats!!! Jennifer on your POTD!...the Pony express has arrived lol, lovely write my friend...love & Ponies...^WW^
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:52 PM
A lovely comment W.W. and thank you for your congratulations. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
One Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 10:45 AM
Lovely poem Jennifer, I have a friend who is a horse therapist. When I visited her, the horses came towards me, but the pony did not. These were big horses, so at first I was a bit scared, but they were very sweet. Congrats on POTD.
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January 20, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Jennifer, as a horse lover, I adore this poem of yours, congratulations on having it selected as POTD, enjoy the honor!
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Thank-you Dear Heart, then you would have adored this pony, he was human I think! Thank-you for your congratulations, and I am certainly very happily surprised! Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
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January 20, 2019 at 10:05 AM
I love animals. You made me love Tony. Congratulations!
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:45 PM
I'm so glad Sunlite Warrior, he is adorable! Thank-you for your congrats. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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January 20, 2019 at 9:45 AM
What a delightful poem! Congratulations on POTD Jennifer :) xomo
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January 20, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Thank-you for visiting and your congrats Maureen, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 20, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Back to congratulate you, dearest Jennifer.. I'm glad your poem is honoured by your fellow poets and friends.. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy the recognition and the honour soul sister.. warmest wishes.. Love and hugs.
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:39 PM
Thank you dear Besma, it was an unexpected but lovely surprise. Thank-you for a wonderful comment. Poetry hugs, your soul sister, Jennifer.
May Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 8:30 AM
A wonderful story Jennifer...Congrats on POTD..
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Glad you enjoyed Joseph - it was as lovely surprise! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 20, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Congrats on POTD Jennifer..enjoyed reading your story.
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Thank-you Vijay, happy you enjoyed Tony the Pony, its a true story, he is so cute! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Godwin Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Hey, I'm guessing you found your POTD page, YAY!!! Good to know you were thus honored, Jenny. Enjoy the feel. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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January 20, 2019 at 12:29 PM
Hi CayCay, I have just got home and we still have to make dinner, so my darling friend I thank you for your congrats, and your wonderful comment but will soup mail you tomorrow. Love and poetry hugs, its a great feeling! Jenny.
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January 20, 2019 at 6:35 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful story, Jennifer, congrats on POTD. John
Proxenos Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Thank-you John, much appreciated your visit. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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