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Tonight the Moon Blushes

tonight i'm adrift on the wings of night's breath the band's playing a Neil Diamond song barely audible through echoes of cheers but all i hear is your voice calling my name in delicate whispers i look around through the edges of darkness a half moon smiles at me beneath the thin layers of clouds shifting like my thoughts i trace the trails of stars glistening like loves eyes wondering if you see my blush in your sky's moon tonight

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Date: 5/22/2020 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Neil Diamond did some great songs. Enjoy your win and day...........
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Date: 10/21/2019 6:57:00 AM
Beautiful, the essence of your poetry as always beautiful. To gaze up at the moon and wonder can those feelings and emotion be felt by another. This one touched me my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/21/2019 11:23:00 AM
Thank you my friend... the moon was so alluring and beautiful friday night, and although i was at work, we were up on a hill and the moon came right over it at us.... 8000 people there and my muse wanted to sing...go figure... hugs :)
Date: 10/19/2019 4:28:00 PM
Sky is moon.. you are among the stars..lovely write, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/19/2019 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Vijay....sometimes nature just wraps me in its beauty... hugs :)
Date: 10/19/2019 1:24:00 PM
Yeah, nothing like a Neil Diamond song, and a blushing moon to set the mood, loved this one!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/19/2019 1:36:00 PM
Thank you John...i live in the hills, and while at work, we could hear the band, the cheers of crowds from 8000 people, yet the moon breaking over the crest of the hill, in an orange shade mesmerized me... hugs :)
Date: 10/19/2019 8:00:00 AM
Nicely captures a moment of angst and adoration.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/19/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much John, i appreciate your visit and feed back :) hugs

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