Tonight

This was breathtaking. I loved this; I'll fav it!

Gorgeous picture you paint Las. Very nice! :)

"In breeze I feel your breath" ! What a wonderful description of her omnipresence in your life. Stunning word power and amazing images all through ! Great Cinquain trio ! All the Best, dear friend.

Your words are as poetic as the picture is beautiful, my dear friend. Lovely poetry. Smiles and Blessings from Texas. Bill

Wow, this is such a beautiful cinquain form poem! Nice imagery.

Dearest Lasaad! What a magnificent, and very romantic, integration of the senses through your signature ability to create memorable imagery - "vest of velveteen!" You built tension and release masterfully! So many well chosen words to articulate your poem. And your title perfectly sets up anticipation! Thank you sharing this treasure. Blessings to you my friend!

- Beautiful, Las - (I'll have to try to write one too) - hugs

Sight, smell and sound combine to produce a poem of high standard. Great imagery. Blessings.

Beautiful imagery throughout this cinquain chain, absolutely love the way you’ve written this. “ honeysuckle perfume” i love that and how you’ve gone so descriptive making every cinquain flow with the other seamlessly! “ in breeze i feel your breath” that is soul touching and expresses such deep emotions. “ gleaming wings that trembled” love that . Your use of poetic techniques in such a restrained form is beyond impressive to read! And to end it with the full moon, is so surreal! Pleasure readn

Dear Lasaad, I'll not write you a novella that expresses my appreciation for your creative mind's skill as a poet. You know how much I admire your poetry... 'Tonight' shines as brightly as all of your poems do... bewitching.

Wow, this is such a beautiful cinquain form poem! The richly poetic and romantic ambience here has hued a gorgeous tapestry of love, which can spellbind anyone's soul! Your wordsmithery is so eloquent with vivid imageries.. "Honeysuckle perfume", "In breeze I feel your breath", "A vest of velveteen gleaming wings that trembled" Also, the alliterations provide a mesmerizing flow to this poem.. So ethereal and serene.. The use of nature is quite profound as well! A wonderful write, as always..