Tomorrow will Soon Come

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The moonlit night echoed with the tireless thrill
Of the camouflaged cicadas chirping the time away.
A small tear fell downwards wetting her soft down
In sheer happiness.  He kissed her tenderly,
Brushing her luscious lips with tender endearment.

Here and there fireflies danced to the cicadas tune.
The leaves of the large oak tree rustled in unison
As the moon and sublime stars shone on their love 
Whilst her wedding ring sent flashes in signals
That it was time to retire to their room in the inn.

Back in their room, they ignore the half-full bottle
Of bubbling champagne, ridding their sweaty clothes 
Betook them to bed, plunging their room into darkness.
The mystical moon shone on them as they hugged
Till she snuggled up into him tired and sleepy.
Both had just one dream, tomorrow will soon come.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 8/31/2024 8:42:00 AM
What a love write/story/picture. Love is in the air. Have a wonderful day writing away...............
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Date: 8/27/2024 1:33:00 PM
Very romantic- a sweet picture of a couple snuggling...
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Date: 8/26/2024 5:44:00 AM
This is so sweet! Reads like a romance novel and I wanted more. Great job Victor
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Date: 8/26/2024 3:48:00 AM
so touching and romantic, we need such poetry every day thanks "poet victor"
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Date: 8/25/2024 8:03:00 PM
A very romantic poem. The photo is sweet.
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Date: 8/25/2024 6:14:00 PM
Here and there fireflies danced to the cicadas tune… Whilst her wedding ring sent flashes in signals That it was time to retire to their room in the inn…interesting last line! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 8/25/2024 11:15:00 AM
Hello victor, a beautiful poem about a couple. my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 8/25/2024 8:15:00 AM
Wedding rings hold such strength of an eternity together and really are a special promise of love for everafter, so your lines - Whilst her wedding ring sent flashes in signals that it was time to retire to their room, were really very special for me. Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER.
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Date: 8/25/2024 4:44:00 AM
Beautifull poem Victor. Well written :)
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Date: 8/24/2024 8:13:00 PM
"The leaves of the large oak tree rustled in unison As the moon and sublime stars shone on their love" -- Beautiful! Very romantic. You are indeed master of the heart.
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Date: 8/24/2024 5:49:00 PM
I love this poem and its magical imagery, especially the line about the wedding ring, and the one about fireflies dancing to the cicadas tune. Just beautiful!
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Date: 8/24/2024 10:25:00 AM
Forbidden love, aye yes, Victor. Passion can become betrayal in many ways, be careful! Love it~Anaya
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Date: 8/24/2024 9:38:00 AM
A moonlit night filled with the promise of romance, Very nicely penned
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Date: 8/24/2024 7:16:00 AM
how beautiful and romantic Victor:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/24/2024 7:08:00 AM
Very romantic, passionate, sensual... verse of longing, a love story's pining. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Date: 8/24/2024 5:52:00 AM
Beautiful love story in brief. I especially liked the line about the wedding ring, a blessing of their intimate union
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Date: 8/24/2024 5:17:00 AM
So beautiful and so very descriptive how youv written this in such a soulful and artistic manner dear victor! I especially loved “ Here and there fireflies danced to the cicadas tune. The leaves of the large oak tree rustled in unison As the moon and sublime stars shone on their love ” how magical and dreamy! Love sounds hopeful and promising! Pleasure reading this gem! Sending you light always
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Date: 8/24/2024 5:09:00 AM
- I agree with Tom ... this is what you are best at ... sensitive and real :) - Have a lovely weekend, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 8/24/2024 4:31:00 AM
You are the master of romantic verse Victor. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2024 7:17:00 AM
agreed on so many levels tom, and victor is a delightful gentleman both on and off soup xx
Date: 8/24/2024 4:05:00 AM
Ok, I'm up. Once again, your words shined true--darkly--but rewardingly, sahha
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Date: 8/24/2024 3:33:00 AM
Ah, you win the award for being the most romantic here on soup, lol, thank you for this, and all the poems you write, :)
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Date: 8/24/2024 2:38:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic one. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I appreciate your visit to my page. Sara K
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Date: 8/24/2024 2:16:00 AM
Another excellent poem from your most poetic pen...
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