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Tomorrow will Soon Come

The moonlit night echoed with the tireless thrill
Of the camouflaged cicadas chirping the time away.
A small tear fell downwards wetting her soft down
In sheer happiness.  He kissed her tenderly,
Brushing her luscious lips with tender endearment.

Here and there fireflies danced to the cicadas tune.
The leaves of the large oak tree rustled in unison
As the moon and sublime stars shone on their love 
Whilst her wedding ring sent flashes in signals
That it was time to retire to their room in the inn.

Back in their room, they ignore the half-full bottle
Of bubbling champagne, ridding their sweaty clothes 
Betook them to bed, plunging their room into darkness.
The mystical moon shone on them as they hugged
Till she snuggled up into him tired and sleepy.
Both had just one dream, tomorrow will soon come.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:42 AM
What a love write/story/picture. Love is in the air. Have a wonderful day writing away...............
Hind Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 1:33 PM
Very romantic- a sweet picture of a couple snuggling...
Jones Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 5:44 AM
This is so sweet! Reads like a romance novel and I wanted more. Great job Victor
Rolland Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 3:48 AM
so touching and romantic, we need such poetry every day thanks "poet victor"
Greenhough Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 8:03 PM
A very romantic poem. The photo is sweet.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Here and there fireflies danced to the cicadas tune… Whilst her wedding ring sent flashes in signals That it was time to retire to their room in the inn…interesting last line! Hugs ~ Kim
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Hello victor, a beautiful poem about a couple. my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
Proxenos Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 8:15 AM
Wedding rings hold such strength of an eternity together and really are a special promise of love for everafter, so your lines - Whilst her wedding ring sent flashes in signals that it was time to retire to their room, were really very special for me. Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER.
Sands Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Beautifull poem Victor. Well written :)
DiMino Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:13 PM
"The leaves of the large oak tree rustled in unison As the moon and sublime stars shone on their love" -- Beautiful! Very romantic. You are indeed master of the heart.
Buehler Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:49 PM
I love this poem and its magical imagery, especially the line about the wedding ring, and the one about fireflies dancing to the cicadas tune. Just beautiful!
Anaya Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Forbidden love, aye yes, Victor. Passion can become betrayal in many ways, be careful! Love it~Anaya
May Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 9:38 AM
A moonlit night filled with the promise of romance, Very nicely penned
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:16 AM
how beautiful and romantic Victor:-) hugs jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Very romantic, passionate, sensual... verse of longing, a love story's pining. God bless you always, love, Gina
Empress Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:17 AM
So beautiful and so very descriptive how youv written this in such a soulful and artistic manner dear victor! I especially loved “ Here and there fireflies danced to the cicadas tune. The leaves of the large oak tree rustled in unison As the moon and sublime stars shone on their love ” how magical and dreamy! Love sounds hopeful and promising! Pleasure reading this gem! Sending you light always
Andresen Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:09 AM
- I agree with Tom ... this is what you are best at ... sensitive and real :) - Have a lovely weekend, my friend :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 4:31 AM
You are the master of romantic verse Victor. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 7:17 AM
agreed on so many levels tom, and victor is a delightful gentleman both on and off soup xx
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 4:05 AM
Ok, I'm up. Once again, your words shined true--darkly--but rewardingly, sahha
Rose  Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 3:33 AM
Ah, you win the award for being the most romantic here on soup, lol, thank you for this, and all the poems you write, :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:38 AM
Ahh!! Romantic one. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I appreciate your visit to my page. Sara K
One Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 2:16 AM
Another excellent poem from your most poetic pen...
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