Tomorrow In You

Our stroll in night rain fascinates my breaths anew, when lark calls a melody I find today, tomorrow in you. Chorus: Not even blooms or night rain, could endure her lasting charm that adorns glossed eyes with love-light,so deeply warm. And every morn evergreen every sigh touched by sweet dew, falls gently on air- brushed cheeks to find today, tomorrow in you. Chorus: Not even blooms or night rain, could endure her lasting charm that adorns glossed eyes with love-light, so deeply warm. It’s you wandering on my mind, that precious is this breathless view while in silence, in longing I find tomorrow… in you. Then let this fondness speak in a bolder, bolder hue my woman cherished for a lifetime dream until I find today, tomorrow... in you. --------- Your Best Love Song Ever Contest Sponsor:The Seeker submitted 2/11/2017 Lyric Form
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Y. Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Hi Nette, These are some amazing lyrics. They're soooo romantic! Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 9:38 PM
Congrats Nette, you are always on top or close, that should tell you something!
Dietrich Avatar
February 16, 2017 at 8:06 PM
Nette a huge congrats to you. I heard the song. It's so beautiful with the music.
Daniel Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 11:09 PM
Congratulations on a great win, Nette:) the lyrics are amazing and Mark has done a beautiful job too:) a 7:)
Smith Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations Nette, wonderful win and Mark did a great job putting it to music, just beautiful...
Burch Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 11:50 PM
Congratulations nette!! Hugggs deb.
Roberts Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Beautiful..
Selfa Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations nette on the success of this poem! Continue writing and share the blessings of poetry! :) _hans
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 6:11 AM
Congrats on top win dear friend.. Till I find today, tomorrow in you.. Love it!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Raven Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Hi Nette, congratulations on your placement in the contest. Such a gentle flow of beauty in words.
Haight Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Beautiful, Nette. Congratulations on your podium win in the 'rainy days' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Gasun Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Sooo beautiful! Congratulations my dear friend, Nette! I'm so glad to read this very wonderful winning piece of yours tonight! Thank you so much for sharing! Miss you! love lots and big hugs, GL
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February 21, 2016 at 4:31 AM
Congrats, Nette. I love your rhymes.
Milliner Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Congratulations on you placement!!
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February 20, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Nette, thank you for the Rainy Day theme win. With Love... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Nette, Thanks for the Support *SKAT*
Sergi Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Hi nette: A beautiful poem on reflection. My compliments.
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 1:30 PM
- Dear Nette, I enjoy reading this .... just beautiful! - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fraser Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Loved to listen to your words in a song Nette, it's beautiful, and the imagery is wonderful~hugs//James :) :)
Horsman Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 11:20 AM
Oh poetry of old, even Shelly would have loved to have written this....he certainly would love it
Parker Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 10:25 AM
This is a beautiful poem nette, I found the melody to be difficult because there was always a couple more extra beats at the end of each stanza, good luck with this contest
Arana Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:58 AM
Mellow kind of rhythm--graceful poem tenderly structured! *Sighs*
La France Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Nette, pretty lyrics for soothing music, an enchanting 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, helping the old
Ongado Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 5:39 AM
Magical combination of lyricism, visual imagery and inviting poetry. I think this is breathtaking!
Allison Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 3:55 AM
oh so beautiful Nette - I have listened to the music but cannot be inspired to write:-) hugs Jan xx
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