Tomorrow

You took proper care to stay just ahead of me, but I never lost sight of your crafted distance. My desire to be with you was strongly sincere so, I often sat on your edge with persistence. We never actually met until my school years when your aspects appeared outside my school window and my child’s mind zip-tingled so we could mingle. We always played carefree in happy made simple. Grown, you were my warmth thru all painful weather. My hurt from life and people kept us together. I held you while raising my challenged son, and clutched you when his epilepsy had come. I gave you my aches to comfort sad marriages, then sought you when I lost to lonely and disparaged. Know fears are no longer the strength shifting my gears. My prayers have long been thanks stuffed, grateful for love. Gently and sweetly, hear that I think of you no more. You past tended me so well that my content now soars. Still, children and broken one’s need you as peace tending faith's design. Friend, you will warm me again when you rise with my last day's shine.
... CayCay Jennings November 18, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/20/2018 5:38:00 PM
Beautifully spiritual CayCay with gratitude overflowing. I hope this is a top winner in the contest my friend! I miss you too. Are you back home now? Hugs, C xxoo
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Date: 11/20/2018 12:28:00 PM
flow of your composition is so smooth. so natural,I am touched. All the best.
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Date: 11/20/2018 4:57:00 PM
Anisha, thank you so much, not just for the uplifting comments but because I now feel assured my poem isn't awful - I began a rewrite last night thinking I'd somehow lost 'it' with this one. Now, I'm leaving it as is, phew. All the best to you as well, today and every TOMORROW. CayCay
Date: 11/20/2018 11:27:00 AM
I'm thinking this is personification. Sorry, I can be dense about some things!! At first i was reading it as an actual friend but some things did not support that. This is very poignant, Caycay. So sincere and from the heart which is how you do your poetry so well!
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Date: 11/19/2018 8:27:00 AM
CayCay, a beautifully penned and emotional write, well done and best of luck in the contest ~
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 11/20/2018 5:02:00 PM
I have 'seen' you more lately than I usually do and I just love that it's so. Your soup presence is golden and your comments encouraging, thank you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 11/19/2018 8:18:00 AM
Such a beautiful and touching poem that seems to flow straight from the heart.
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Date: 11/20/2018 5:04:00 PM
Yes, my heart wrote it, after all it is my heart that spent so many years living in tomorrow! Thanks for commenting and for being Chris. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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