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Tohoku -- When Worlds Have Altered

On an early spring day, washed brilliant with clover In the land of the sun, and sweet cherry blossom A tremble, a rumble, that rattled the earth Cracking open the spring day, like the devil's own plaything Plates of dispute, on the edge of destruction Beneath the sea’s surface…anger's wrath lies in waiting… It came with no warning, …a mighty surge of horror A tower of strength, to this tiny island flower The harsh call of nature, came boldly from the shore Relentless, the shaking, battering to the core And altered the earth with a shattering shrill Spilling despair, in a pillage of flurry Killing the helpless, yet… leaving the courage O’ land, of gentle people, wearing dignity’s expression Those from afar, watched on with compassion We gasped, then we cried, yet are awed with impressions How hands helping hands, and courage ensued Kind hearts, claimed the bruised, and calmed the confused You banded together…helping each another, Balance of elders, will hold you forever.. Grace under fire…. with honor we brand you You raise up the spirit with hands of the valiant Respect you have earned and honor you wear The sun keeps on rising…..and will shine ever more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2011 12:23:00 PM
Many congrats on both your wins, Carrie : )
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Date: 5/21/2011 12:29:00 AM
Many Congrats Carrie on big coveted win in Debbie's contest. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/20/2011 10:12:00 PM
Yes, they have the sun on their flag,don't they? Such an appropriate symbol to use at the end of this awesome poem, Carrie .Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/20/2011 10:00:00 AM
Big congratulations, Carrie on your magnificent win in Debbie Gucci's contest, " Tribute To Japan " Your poem is a tribute to the gentle people of Japan. Emotions, feelings, despair and hope echo with grace and courage to bring this beautiful land to its former glory. You have succeeded in telling a tragic story with mastery, compassion, admiration and honor. Enjoy another well-deserved victory. God loves you...:)! Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 5/20/2011 3:30:00 AM
A beautiful piece, many congrats to you Carrie x
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:48:00 PM
This is beautiful Carrie. I loved the line, O' land.... Many congrats.
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:39:00 PM
congrats on this fine win. cory
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Date: 5/19/2011 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:10:00 AM
Coming back here to congratulate you, dear Carrie ^_^ -- that sun definitely rises-- I actually saw an amazing sunset today (ok oops why am I talking about sunsets?? it's just that the sun was red when I saw it so it reminded me of Japan)-- and that is so wonderful that kids over there are also making the paper cranes, made me smile that you remembered me, thank you-- hopefully I can send my cranes by the end of the year (aack slowpoke me??) --hugs :) & super congrats again :)
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:38:00 AM
This is so well written, Carrie. Congrats to you on your win. Cheers, ~Soulfire~
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:01:00 AM
Many congrats to you : )
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Date: 5/19/2011 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of debbie, Carrie
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Date: 5/19/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on another great win in the Japan contest .. enjoy luv..
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Date: 5/6/2011 11:57:00 AM
Whenever I read about or see photos of the quake (more of the resilience and strength of the Japanese) I get goosebumps-- your moving poem is a wonderful testament of that Carrie! I just felt this one and can't help but just be awed by the Japanese-- they are truly a nation to admire and to give our wholehearted support-- the Sun will always rise, such a fitting name for their beautiful country... & thank you for your heartwarming comments in both my poems, you got me teary eyed soupmail :) hugs
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:19:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Carrie. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and inspiration to continue your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/5/2011 4:34:00 PM
In stanza one your descriptions are so surreal. You paint the blithe island scene with such somnolent strokes. I think stanza one is brilliantly crafted. Enjoyed the emotive and empathetic strains in the final stanzas.
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