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Truth is naked taboo. Temper race-scorn are stiff. Taurus sisters twinkle Thus Pleiades limbs clump. Truth glimpses will surface. Trust strengthens social ties. Twine to others' feelings Written April 26, 2021 Pleiades T Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman Syllables checked howmanysyllables

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/29/2021 8:15:00 PM

Lasaad, congrats on your win in my contest with your creatively written Pleiades! Blessiings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2021 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I like the way you did this one and picture. Have a blessed day................

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/28/2021 10:11:00 AM

Hi Lasaas, I'm just coming to say congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/28/2021 2:13:00 AM

Great thoughts Lasaad. Enjoyed reading this 'Togetherness' Pleiades... Congrats on your win...God bless.. ~ Ani

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2021 8:05:00 PM

Great Pleiades, Lasaad , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/26/2021 12:16:00 PM

Powerful and profound, my dear friend, Lasaad! Good luck. Stay safe!

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/26/2021 12:30:00 PM

Thanks, dear Demetrios, for your so kind words. You stay safe too. Blessings

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/26/2021 10:32:00 AM

Very thought-provoking, Lasaad. You really know your stars, my friend. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed reading your Pleiades.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/26/2021 10:42:00 AM

I’m glad you enjoyed it Dear Milton, I hope I can have more in depth knowledge about the stars I’m a fun of the discovery channel just for this purpose, have a blessed day my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2021 10:23:00 AM

Your knowledge of the constellations is to be admired. Hope it is understood for not every one is interested in astronomy.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/26/2021 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Dear, Victor I don’t think it’s that hard it’s actually the pure meaning of Pleiades, and the essence of this is be together as human beings, like the stars protecting each other from the dangerous space dust.

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/26/2021 8:55:00 AM

Do the answers lie in the stars Lasaad, the ancient Egyptians and numerous civilisations believed so, and even now the greatest minds on earth search the heavens for answers, you have put together a wonderful thoughtful Pleiades, best of luck in the contest, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/26/2021 9:41:00 AM

Dear David thanks for your very clever feedback, indeed I think the answers lie somewhere above the sky's, in this Pleiades I’m alluding to the Pleiades real meaning that conspicuous cluster of stars in the constellation Taurus that includes six stars in the form of a very small dipper. To stay together to be protected from the Orion dangerous Dust. Regards Lasaad

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/26/2021 5:37:00 AM

WoW! Lasaad, What a clever way to use the letter T. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/26/2021 6:22:00 AM

Thanks dearest Alexis, that’s so kind of you, I hope the sponsor sees what you have seen. Warm hugs and regards // Lasaad