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Together Yet Alone

Moods blend and swirl, a loud note, a soft tone Countless hues with nuanced shades tempest blown Whilst be it full understanding we seek Alas I still find that we are all quite unique This symphony over the years we hone And yet together we may feel all alone 11/10/22 Honorable Mention Bitesize Poem no.55 Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 11/29/2022 4:40:00 AM
A beautiful theme and writing. Congratulations!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/29/2022 12:26:00 PM
Thanks for the congratulations, much appreciated, Christuraj!
Date: 11/28/2022 7:57:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/29/2022 12:25:00 PM
Thanks for the congratulations, much appreciated, Beata. May your day be blessed!
Date: 11/28/2022 2:51:00 PM
Great rhyme and couplet rhyming Robert. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/29/2022 12:24:00 PM
Thanks for the congratulations, much appreciated, Linda!
Date: 11/28/2022 1:03:00 PM
lovely flow ~
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/29/2022 12:23:00 PM
Thank you for the placement, I'm honored. Always good to go with the flow as Lao Tsu would have it! Robert
Date: 11/11/2022 10:39:00 AM
"All quite unique" and still seek ways to stay united...we really need encouragement every day! Robert, Have A Great Veteran's Day!!!;)
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/11/2022 12:38:00 PM
We have to accept differences in each other. Thank you! Robert
Date: 11/11/2022 6:20:00 AM
Love this Robert….so well written…Debx
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/11/2022 12:47:00 PM
Your "Streets of Loneliness" was well written Deb. and tragically thought provoking! Robert
Date: 11/11/2022 12:09:00 AM
It's like posting these poems; somebody may understand a line or two and that has to be enough. Elizabeth
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Date: 11/10/2022 3:22:00 PM
I think it takes efforts to unite. Good one.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 11/11/2022 12:50:00 PM
We have to be willing to engage and cross many barriers to get to know people. Thanks, Kim

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