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Together We Shine As One:

Glowing emeralds sparkle in her hair, Her loving eyes penetrate to the core, With a hint of gaiety bounding there, Containing myself not from wanting more. If she was an angel sent from above, I would keep her grounded never to leave, Revealing my truth wrapped in tender love, Lovingly smile at the magic we weave. And when the ambience is filled with glee, It shall overflow with euphoric dreams, For only in each other we will see, The essence of love in its glowing beams. Take my hand and heart forever we are, United together a shining star.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Tugaff Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Beautiful Sonnet
Chibuikem Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Exquisite one...
Johnson Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 8:49 AM
A most lovely piece my friend, and very deserving of being featured. Blessings.
Sands Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Beautifully written WW! :)
Hitchcock Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Very nice.
Mcconnell Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Nice write White Wolf, good penning with fine rhyme. Blessings Gordon
Lindley Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Excellent sonnet my friend. Smooth as silk, with a positive and deep message of the blessings of being in love.. Super ten my friend.. A fav...
Wolf Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 6:52 PM
G'day Robert! Thank you very much /|\
Ricci Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 6:51 AM
White Wolf White Wolf White Wolf. Your talent is a shining star. This is more than beautiful. Such words and thoughts to be shared between two special people. The execution White Wolf is so smooth. You delivered what I call the total package. Where would we be without love. Nowhere. It was an honor turning to this entry this morning. Well done in its entirety.
Wolf Avatar
April 19, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Why thank you, Lisa! I must admit I'm rather overwhelmed by your compliments. This poem was a result of inspiration from another poem on the soup I read earlier today. /|\
Ella Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 11:00 PM
A very heartfelt poem Budgie <3 It is so romantic :)
Wolf Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 11:54 PM
Thank you very much, Sara /|\
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