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Glowing emeralds sparkle in her hair, Her loving eyes penetrate to the core, With a hint of gaiety bounding there, Containing myself not from wanting more. If she was an angel sent from above, I would keep her grounded never to leave, Revealing my truth wrapped in tender love, Lovingly smile at the magic we weave. And when the ambience is filled with glee, It shall overflow with euphoric dreams, For only in each other we will see, The essence of love in its glowing beams. Take my hand and heart forever we are, United together a shining star.

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Date: 2/2/2018 1:03:00 PM
Beautiful Sonnet
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Date: 2/2/2018 11:14:00 AM
Exquisite one...
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Date: 2/2/2018 8:49:00 AM
A most lovely piece my friend, and very deserving of being featured. Blessings.
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Date: 1/31/2018 12:42:00 PM
Beautifully written WW! :)
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Date: 1/31/2018 10:39:00 AM
Very nice.
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Date: 1/29/2018 1:25:00 PM
Nice write White Wolf, good penning with fine rhyme. Blessings Gordon
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Date: 4/20/2017 9:00:00 AM
Excellent sonnet my friend. Smooth as silk, with a positive and deep message of the blessings of being in love.. Super ten my friend.. A fav...
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Date: 4/20/2017 6:52:00 PM
G'day Robert! Thank you very much /|\
Date: 4/19/2017 6:51:00 AM
White Wolf White Wolf White Wolf. Your talent is a shining star. This is more than beautiful. Such words and thoughts to be shared between two special people. The execution White Wolf is so smooth. You delivered what I call the total package. Where would we be without love. Nowhere. It was an honor turning to this entry this morning. Well done in its entirety.
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Date: 4/19/2017 7:00:00 AM
Why thank you, Lisa! I must admit I'm rather overwhelmed by your compliments. This poem was a result of inspiration from another poem on the soup I read earlier today. /|\
Date: 4/18/2017 11:00:00 PM
A very heartfelt poem Budgie <3 It is so romantic :)
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Date: 4/18/2017 11:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara /|\

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