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Together We Are Invincible-Five Lines

Snowflakes falling like unsaid prayers, To land, awaiting the rest of the flakes, Millions together make a lasting impression, Think of yourself like a snowflake, alone a silent voice, together can be seen and heard, we are invincible.
penned 4 November 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/4/2016 7:27:00 PM
Very nice!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/4/2016 10:20:00 PM
Hi Heidi thank you for stopping by....Seren
Date: 11/4/2016 7:07:00 PM
I especially adore that first line Seren what an uplifting write !:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/4/2016 10:21:00 PM
Thanks Jan, just 5 lines isn't easy to convey something....Seren
Date: 11/4/2016 7:07:00 PM
Hi Seren, I agree with the message within these five lines. "Together we are in invincible ". I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/4/2016 10:19:00 PM
thank you Alexis...Seren

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