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together, we are crafted, in loving embrace a dazzling undress!

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Date: 10/6/2012 8:14:00 AM
i dont usually enjoy many Haiku poems, but I really enjoyed yours...thank you Edward - Shaz
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:04:00 AM
Impressed by your use of simple yet powerful language -- and the feeling it creates in me. Love this poem.
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Date: 1/21/2012 11:42:00 PM
Edward, dazzling haiku...thank you for sharing,, forever & ever,.. PD
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Date: 1/21/2012 5:29:00 PM
oooh, what a great last line!!
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Date: 1/21/2012 11:34:00 AM
Perfect Edward! oxox Anne-Lise
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