Together, We Are

together, we are crafted, in loving embrace a dazzling undress!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cheesman Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 8:14 AM
i dont usually enjoy many Haiku poems, but I really enjoyed yours...thank you Edward - Shaz
Munro Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Impressed by your use of simple yet powerful language -- and the feeling it creates in me. Love this poem.
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January 21, 2012 at 11:42 PM
Edward, dazzling haiku...thank you for sharing,, forever & ever,.. PD
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 5:29 PM
oooh, what a great last line!!
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Perfect Edward! oxox Anne-Lise
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