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Toffee Apple Tragedy

A little boy had a big lick Of a toffee apple on a stick, His tongue got stuck When he had a huge suck, Poor little red-tongued Rick.

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Sharon Gulley

Date: 4/13/2015 10:37:00 AM

Your great with humor, John. I like your stories...Sharon G.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/27/2015 7:26:00 PM

G'day John...ha-ha; not a good ad for toffee apples, although Rick wouldn't go hungry for days. Thanks John - Lindsay

John Williams
Date: 3/27/2015 8:38:00 PM

Hi Lindsay, I only wrote this poem hoping that people might get stuck on my poetry. I hope I'm right and i don't end up red-faced over it all. Thanks for reading my poem Lindsay. Kind regards----John PS: I think i wrote a good one last night, I'll send it to your email. It's called. 'Witchy Poo From Dunedoo.'

Jan Allison

Date: 3/27/2015 7:38:00 AM

lol made me chuckle:-) Hugs jan xx

John Williams
Date: 3/27/2015 7:48:00 AM

Hi Jan, Thanks again for reading one of my poems. Glad it gave you a chuckle. I hope other people get stuck on it. Kind regards----John

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/27/2015 6:38:00 AM

Lol, ouch.

John Williams
Date: 3/27/2015 7:15:00 AM

Hi Njeri, Don't feel sorry for the little boy. When he grew up he released a song called, 'Stuck On You,' and it was a huge success. It was released on Red Label, a subsiduary of Sticky Sounds. Kind regards----John