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a streaked bluish sky leaves gone and trees stand waiting . . . snowflakes drifting by ____________________ November 3, 2021 Poetry/Traditional Haiku/today Copyright Protected, ID 11-1403-358-03 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Haiku - Nature - 5/7/5 = 17 syllables

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Date: 11/4/2021 6:52:00 AM
Nice one Constance, the red maple out back just turned scarlet as the first frost pinched its cheeks
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Constance La France
Date: 11/4/2021 8:37:00 AM
John, thanks for the visit and comment and compliment, all our trees have no leaves now and today frost painted everything ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/3/2021 3:27:00 PM
A great metaphor, those drifting snowflakes. Well done.
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Date: 11/4/2021 8:37:00 AM
ML, thanks for the compliment and visit ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/3/2021 2:10:00 PM
I really like you Haiku, very nice progression linking each line. I could easily visualize the tree and the changing seasons. Well written Constance. Bill Baker
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Date: 11/4/2021 8:38:00 AM
Bill, thank you for the compliment on my haiku, appreciate ~ friendship and poetry _Constance