Toast Jam and Sputter

eggs turning lumpy cold pale moon coughs morning stalls out

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 8/14/2023 10:53:00 AM

Where is the bacon?? I hope u are not too sad. I'm sorry to hear you were.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/10/2023 10:57:00 AM

I still sense you are a bit down, my friend… Hope you see rays of sunshine

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2023 7:01:00 PM

Yeah, you're right. My jawbone is dragging on the ground, right next to my earlobes. ~ Posing for Picasso

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2023 2:16:00 AM

Quite interesting work here. Eggs lumpy, a coughing moon, and morning that stalls out. I am somewhat confused without adding some imagination in the mix. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us and for your visit to my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2023 7:02:00 PM

Gotta put that 'Imagination Cap' on, Sara. Then when you take it off, you'll understand this poem... better than I do!